some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed, other people believe that zoos serve useful functions,which view point do you support?
I support the point that zoos well perform the job of preventing animals and birds becoming endangered species. The main reason for my inclination towards the fact is that they provide the major necessities required for survival. Firstly they serve food at regular intervals and make sure the food is nutritient. Sanctuaries do conduct health check-up camps thereby addressing any problems which animals face in terms of illness, cold, etc., wildlife is something that cannot be mimicked in cities but a similar atmosphere can be created by the management to have separated areas for their living.
since the zoo management is providing a vast area for animals to breed, the species will feel the same when they are in the forest. they also feel that they are protected from their enemies when under a separate area. but in the forest, since predators are everywhere, the herbivores and omnivores are not safe and their generation may demolish being swollen by carnivores or any other danger. Here such problems are totally avoided.
Many animals die with the void of food and water, which is the primary source for living. In zoos, there will be dedicated employees assigned to monitor the food chain and diet plan for animals and they get adequate food regularly. but in the forest, food is scarce and the animals have to fight with their enemies to get their food and thereby leading to loss of count in their groups. Even such food is acquired they tend to fight among themselves.
The next prime factor is the disease. animals once get affected by any disease, they dont know the treatment to cure them or the measures to prevent them. This will eventually make the disease spread through the air and reach the other groups making the whole generation to suffer. In zoos, a health monitor or a veterinary doctor will be assigned for an animal family. He will take adequate measures to make sure the best possible way of curing such wounds or diseases.
The most dangerous threat to the animals are the hunters who kill them for their skin, flesh and other valuables. Keeping them protected under the zoo makes them spend their rest of life much peacefully and grow their generation thereby promoting wildlife. wildlife is becoming extinct due to few of above mentioned factors. The world wildlife organization should continue taking measures to prevent any species from turning into rare.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, so, well, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2002.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 404.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95544554455 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42977539089 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542079207921 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.619135477 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3333333333 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2380952381 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.47619047619 5.45110844103 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0863128539768 0.236089414692 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0260204928448 0.076458572812 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318741212121 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0521022683601 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331993373259 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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