Sometimes filmmakers make movies that are based on books. When a movie is based on a book, some people prefer to read the book before watching the movie. Other people prefer to read the book only after they have watched the movie. Which do you prefer and why?
In movie world, there are several different types of films which produced and created by producers and editors such like autobiography,science fictions,comedies, etc.And, all of them followed by different generations people, and all filmmakers use different kind of resources for making their movies.
First of all, creating movie is the difficult job which created by managers, and in that, all workers has their own parts of whole work,and a writer is the most important member.All writers have to be creative, and they sometimes use several resources, these resources influence their productivity.Although There would be any other choosable resources, the book is the best resource which using in film environments.So, these writers want to improve their reflectivity they should use books.
Some films would be very informative or fictional, because detailed books could be used in these films.Almost all types of these films and books could not be understood enoughly and carefully in the first time.So, audiences of these movies usually make double work.For example, if the audience of film watch film first then he or she would read book, in the reverse of that approach, the first is the read and the second is the watch.
In addition, some kind of films are more funny and not detailed such like comedy films.For these films, lookers do not make much efforts, they always want to be fun.But, some of them could be wonder so they want to read the book which watched before.So, they want to seek the book of film.
In my opinion, taking account of all these reasons, it depends of books types and audiences wonderings.And, these things lead these two approaches.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, so, then, for example, in addition, kind of, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 273.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16117216117 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02923980425 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 20.1344086022 268% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.650569829 48.9658058833 246% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 281.8 100.406767564 281% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.6 20.6045352989 265% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.4 5.45110844103 374% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19182357186 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107684044048 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556315637024 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107684044048 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556315637024 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.2 11.7677419355 257% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 25.13 58.1214874552 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 10.1575268817 228% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.54 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.01818996416 121% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 10.002688172 280% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.0537634409 235% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.247311828 234% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.