TPO-02 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Some people would say that always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship and others would say that it’s not. I agree with the given statement that telling the truth is fundamental. A relationship where truth is not considered first will end up hurting both people and leave them with unpleasant memories and experiences which can affect their future.
Always not telling the truth multiple negative effects such as hurting them. Some people say that truth is like a surgery which heals over the time and lies are painkillers which relieve pain for short amount of time but hurts after the given time. Although white lies can be told few times, the cumulative lie will not only hurt them, but also it will break their trust.
Second reason is the painful memory after relationship. Some people who trusted their partners with tremendous amount of belief are usually left damaged with huge scars when their partners break their trust. Short time effects would include emotional changes, pain and disbelief. Long time effect would be a person getting non-believer who never trusts anyone and lifestyle changes such as disliking certain types of people and behaviours.
In conclusion, despite people having different opinions and choices, the most important thing in any kind of relationship is trust and honesty.

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Average: 6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The adverb 'Always' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...break their trust. Second reason is the painful memory after relationship. Some ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, in conclusion, kind of, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 52.1666666667 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 1977.66487455 62% => OK
No of words: 233.0 407.700716846 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24034334764 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58330597562 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 212.727598566 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562231759657 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 618.680645161 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0354690752 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.75 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205730785165 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108254658625 0.076458572812 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128146318797 0.0737576698707 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177875555339 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.156923957158 0.0645574589148 243% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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