Time management is an important part of our life, undoubtedly. It is so important that sometimes being success or failure completely depends on our time management. Some people agree with the idea that people today spend too much time on personal enjoyment rather than doing things they should do; however others disagree. I definitely believe that people should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy for two important reasons.
First, sometimes we have to do things that we do not want to do. It is inevitable that postpone or not doing those kind of things. For example, sometimes we have to meet the doctor. In fact, we do not like meeting a doctor because of spending some moneys or their acute operations that they do on us in the hospital. In this kind of conditions we have to meet the doctor because we had a severe pain in our body or there is something wrong with us, something such as emothinal problems, physical problems or so on. As another example, we hate standing in a line for enrolling in the university or shool for so long but we must do it. Mayby we know that being in the line would be worth to get a degree subconsciously. As you can see, even though we do not like to do some kind of things, it is ineluctable not to do it.
Second, we should avoid doing some enjoyable things. Every one know doing some enjoyable things sometimes may induce some detriment. For example, these days working on the Internet would be so much enjoyment, especially social networks. You can make some new friends which is very fun for some people. You can get familier with some other cultures. You can talk and even see some other people from other cuntries too. But if someone do this a lot, they may expose themself into a harmful condition. They may be addicted to it. As you can see, people sometimes sould not doing addictive things.
To sum up, people sometimes should do things that they do not enjoy. Not only do we have to do things that we do not want do to, but we also should avoid doing some enjoyable addcitive things.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 109, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'those kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; those kinds
...s inevitable that postpone or not doing those kind of things. For example, sometimes we ha...
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Line 3, column 349, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... get familier with some other cultures. You can talk and even see some other people...
^^^
Line 3, column 433, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...from other cuntries too. But if someone do this a lot, they may expose themself in...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, for example, in fact, kind of, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51482479784 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46962644695 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469002695418 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.0 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4033906821 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.8260869565 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1304347826 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21739130435 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.466722720979 0.236089414692 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173735730484 0.076458572812 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.165665570854 0.0737576698707 225% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.364327689207 0.150856017488 242% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112798259913 0.0645574589148 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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