tpo 06
life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
it is a controversial issue that is life today easier more than in the past. Personally, however, I believe that life has never been as easy as it is right now. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I explore in the following essay.
Firstly, people, today work fewer hours than they did when my grandparents were very young. this increases both our leisure time and our overall happiness. These days, most people enjoy time off on the weekend and, usually, work no more than forty hours per week. This means that people today can readily pursue hobbies and interests that make them happy. I feel that my own family’s history is a good example of this contrast. In the past, my grandparents worked six-day per week for a total of about fifty hours. In contrast, I work just five days a week and even sometimes at the home office for two days per week, which means that I have extra ten hours per week of free time than my grandparents' era. During this free time, I take part in various outdoor activities such as hiking and it certainly helps to relieve stress. This makes my life extremely comfortable.
Secondly, there are many advanced home appliances in the modern world, which makes it easier for people to daily lives now. When my grandparents were young, their kitchen was equipped with no more than a simple stove. Today, in contrast, our kitchens contain a large range of appliances such as blenders, kettles, and mixers. For example, my kitchen contains a lot of these tools. I use them to prepare various traditional foods such as sushi every night. I feel that cooking traditional food increases my well-being and overall health. My grandparents ate nutritious and delicious food, but it was really time-consuming and difficult for them to prepare meals because they lacked modern appliances. It is certainly clear to see how using these devices is an important part to improve people's comfort.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that I enjoy a much more comfortable and easier life than my grandparents did when they were young. This is because I work fewer hours and because I have access to a lot of modern devices which make meal preparation easier than ever before.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, even so, for example, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77427821522 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58442368874 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522309711286 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5236773464 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6818181818 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3181818182 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13636363636 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238278038466 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766361804056 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104040224179 0.0737576698707 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177603290034 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567994902039 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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