TPO-16 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In modern century, where all the population's lives are occupied many ambitions and dreams, which everyone are just passing through their major and tough situation and impossible to evaluate a time for himself/herself as well as foe the family too. So, by affecting towards holidays are extremely better option for relaxing and stressing days. When some one is going to plan for vacations, the most of the thinking arises that: where we should go, how much cost it would requires and significantly, how we manage or plan the trip? some person should be present for this piece of work. These are the queries, which have to be solved already by joining that days, thus, many families arrange a tourist guy, fir many reasons like: proper selections and choices for the place, manages all the bookings and make your trip memorable.

To begin up with my first reason, it is meaning full to hire a man, a tourist boy, who is a person, hired by the people to visits them either cities or countries and proceed with all the perfect planning without wasting time and extra money, just charge himself with his particular fee. Thus, he is responsible to fixes and operates your routine according to that place and your requirements. and feels the pleasure to spend the time with other people.

Furthermore, This boy and the whole group looks your all necessities and stuffs, the important measure, which have to be taken, like: hotels, plane tickets and the food, among the whole group. To illustrate this, last year, me and family was went for a vacations and we just call the guiding guy and his group, I still remember, our plan was super amazing because we did not go through the discussions, we were just traveled along them and were lived like a new family for few days.

Lastly, making memories and collecting them, I thinks, it should be the main purpose of your life. You are taking into account this by you family and want to with all your heart and soul. But what if, you are gotten stuck in choosing the areas, which inspire you and would not help to make your event long lasting and cause interruption, In turn, you definitely, will be tired of this and could not enjoy most of the things, so now, it ought to hire a boy for this especial journey.

To conclude, as a matter of fact, yes! I completely agree with the above statement that, traveling by the group, which is leads by a tourist is the most comfortable way. People must try this new adventure among the groups.

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Average: 8.1 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 349, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...n for relaxing and stressing days. When some one is going to plan for vacations, the mos...
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Line 1, column 471, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'require'
Suggestion: require
...re we should go, how much cost it would requires and significantly, how we manage or pla...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...cantly, how we manage or plan the trip? some person should be present for this piece...
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Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: NON_ACTION_CONTINUOUS[3]
Message: The verb mean is usually not used with a continuous form, use the simple form instead. Suggestion: 'means'
Suggestion: means
... To begin up with my first reason, it is meaning full to hire a man, a tourist boy, who ...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... To begin up with my first reason, it is meaning full to hire a man, a tourist boy, who ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...ng to that place and your requirements. and feels the pleasure to spend the time wi...
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Line 7, column 48, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'think'
Suggestion: think
... making memories and collecting them, I thinks, it should be the main purpose of your ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, lastly, look, so, still, thus, well, i think, as a matter of fact, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 13.8261648746 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2046.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 439.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66059225513 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40963520272 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576309794989 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.9680244938 48.9658058833 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.4 100.406767564 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2666666667 20.6045352989 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119314529157 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438760660794 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455989567895 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785009589087 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399990408609 0.0645574589148 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 11.7677419355 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.1575268817 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.34 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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