Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Teachers have an essential influence on their students. Their thoughts and style is dramatically under the observation of students in classroom. Although it is critical to have social and political discussions in class during the semester as a one of effective material to learn subjects to students, in my point of view it is better not to make their own views known to students. Presenting their view may seem to be honest but some has consequences as bellow.
Firstly, in a classroom there may be some students who are agreed with their teachers point of view as well as who are disagreed. Usually the contrasts between their views causes some troubles to the teacher by the disagreed students. For example, years ago in our country, a teacher who was in favor of communist concepts was harrased by one of his students who was totally opposite to this attitude. In case the teacher did not revealed his views, he would be safe.
Secondly, since students may not be very rational in their school period, they may hate the lesson whoes teacher is the one their attitudes are not contested to. Therefore, the teachers' efforts in teaching would be wasted under such circumstance. I can example one of our teachers who said his opinion about the up coming election. He tought geography to our class. Most of the students wanted to elect the opposite side of his candidate. This simple matter influenced intensively our final exam because most of students had negative feeling about geography.
Finally, as social and specially political debates are very attractive for students, they all want to provide their own thoughts. In such condition, controlling the class would be impossible especially if the teacher supports some views and ignores the rest. Utterly, the classroom will be lefted behind the schools' schedule.
In conclusion, providing social and political discussions in class is a merit unless the individual view point is revealed. Troubles may occur to the teacher whose concepts is not accepted by students, students may be impacted negatively by their teacher, in addition, the classroom would be undercontrol.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 430, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'reveal'
Suggestion: reveal
...s attitude. In case the teacher did not revealed his views, he would be safe. Secondly...
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Line 3, column 505, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the students') or simply say ''most students''.
Suggestion: most of the students; most students
...nced intensively our final exam because most of students had negative feeling about geography. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08285714286 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77732656653 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514285714286 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5703077223 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6315789474 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4210526316 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15789473684 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2480279717 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807264200857 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504975786495 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152419577485 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360923213257 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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