TPO 26 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parent s jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents jobs Use specific reasons and examples to support | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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TPO 26:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parent’s jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents' jobs.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

One of the main issues in modern life is choosing the way of life, education, jobs, direction, and interests of children because of the variety of options everyone has. For this issue, everyone has their own method to show and guide their child. Some people believe to children should choose a similar job and continue their parent jobs and use their help in contrast others believe in main interests and desires of children to choose their path. I believe giving freedom to children to choose their jobs will have greater results in the future.

First of all, with the growth of humans, their interests always change and this is one of the specifications of humans. and their interest is the main source of motivation to continue and moving forward. With choosing parent's jobs without interest, children feel no energy and willingness to improve their skills and prepare for their job. Not only lack of motivation but also it makes the child be dependant to their parents.

The second reason is the talent and ability of children are different with their parents. everyone has many different skills and abilities. With using their talents they can incredibly progress fast and achieve a higher level of success. There are thousands and millions of types of jobs and approaches for children to choose as their pass and it's impossible to gain enough info about. So talents and skills are a great sign that gives hints to children. Maybe with forcing children to choose a job that they are not skillful enough and just because it's similar to their parent's job can take the child to disappointment and grief. In contrast following talents can have a great impact on their willingness and motivation to make them happier.

The final reason for this question is about creativity and confronting with new experiences. From the childness, the first thing they got familiar with is their parents' jobs and challenges and routines that parents's always dealing with. They adapt with this space and thoughts and try to use their experiences not their innovations. But with choosing a new field and job they will experience new things and people and face with new challenges and situations that are mostly new for them. In addition, they may have more freedom to use their innovations and ideas in their works.

For conclusion, having freedom in choosing a job, kids can find their main area of interest and become adept people, feels better motivation and can experience new worlds whereas following parent's job can prevent kids from being brave and use their creativity and may put them in daily routine.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 121, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...is one of the specifications of humans. and their interest is the main source of mo...
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Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Everyone
...ldren are different with their parents. everyone has many different skills and abilities...
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Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ferent with their parents. everyone has many different skills and abilities. With using their ...
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Line 5, column 635, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...e child to disappointment and grief. In contrast following talents can have a great impa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, whereas, in addition, in contrast, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 36.0 13.8261648746 260% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2168.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 438.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9497716895 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48130139497 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461187214612 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 636.3 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9402962131 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.238095238 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09523809524 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.467673698211 0.236089414692 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156890155477 0.076458572812 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116891778266 0.0737576698707 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.301519380405 0.150856017488 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357504377471 0.0645574589148 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, whereas, in addition, in contrast, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments