Since the dawn of humanity, people have been trying to follow their parents path and it is useful in case of free choose. Which I agree with it and in what follows I will delve into some reasons that can aptly support my viewpoint.
From my perspective, one of the most striking reason is that some people are born to work in a specific career. In my opinion, some particular jobs need innate intelligent which transfer genetically from parents to their children. in other word, children inherited it.For instance,some kids are interested in mathematics since their early aged. This is more plausible whit biological transfer.
Furthermore, in my opinion another outstanding reason that I should take into account is family support. Parents can purely teach their children and show them the right way to go with no doubt.People can share their experience therefore, children would learn from their elder sibling's experiences in order to improve themselves and thrive to reach their goals. In addition, parents can both financially and emotionally support their children so, they can proud of their kids. For example, if individuals want to challenge themselves and experience everything in their own way it would cost money and too much risks. What's more maybe some argues would be happened between parents and their children so, kids would lost their financially and emotionally support.
In short, according to all above reasons it can be conducted that it is better for youth who do not know which way to go, to trust their parents and follow their jobs which could be plausible kid's desired opportunity, too. But that was the story in nutshell. There are some more reasons and examples that might be challenging but, are not mentioned above due to the death of the time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in short, no doubt, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 296.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02702702703 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64954480151 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564189189189 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1075016191 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.285714286 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 5.45110844103 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248171216933 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813070915143 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716998809327 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150647130269 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254658721793 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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