\Every parent would like to see their children successful in their career and life. The choice of field to work will influence the living standards and social status of an individual. There are two streams of mind when it comes down to select a profession; first one will be to follow footsteps of parents and second one is to carve your own path. There are advantages and disadvantages with both options, but I strongly believe following your own calling will drive you to become successful.
Most importantly, to become successful in any field, an individual must have the passion and love for that career. This will be the only force that will drive the career for years to come and become successful and to achieve the goal. I have seen numerous examples of people whose careers sore to high due to their dedication and passion, on the other hand some failed miserably due to lack of enough motivation. Having parents’ guidance and expertise will be highly beneficial for children to learn tips and tricks of any filed. This gives an added advantage to navigate in your career. But, at the same time with the development and advances in technology parent's knowledge may become outdated and will restrict the support.
Next, over the years the social status associated with the job may change and children will regret their decision when they see their friends at higher level. For example, few years back securing a government job and working there till retirement was an image of successful career, but with globalization and changing economy, young workforce have broader understanding and different approach for professional growth.
Lastly, no one can deny the fact that today's youth is under tremendous pressure to perform well in their studies, jobs as well as life. The competition is getting sever day by day. When children are measured against their successful parents, it puts unnecessary pressure on them to do better than parents. If a child is choosing a different career at least he won't have immediate competition at home and will get a chance to prove his or her mantle.
In conclusion, for aforementioned reasons, I am a big supporter of choosing a different career option than following parents' footsteps.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 39, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
... Lastly, no one can deny the fact that todays youth is under tremendous pressure to p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, lastly, may, second, so, well, at least, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1874.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02412868633 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7392406346 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581769436997 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8626056278 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.235294118 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9411764706 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236636876834 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070926784923 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580411346664 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139163808253 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381455264523 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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