To get a job offer is a big moment in the life of everyone, especially for those that are hunting for a new job. In fact, find a job is a milestone that every adult have to reach at some point of his life. Hence, to get a secure job can be ideal for some people. In my opinion, by contrast, a secure job offer not always fullfils our expectations, and thus, I prefer to wait to another job offer where I woul feel more comfortable. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, secure job offers mean that you are going to work at the same place for a long time, which can make your life become a boring and rutinary one. In my opinin, the kind of works introduce you in a permanent stress state, which ultimately leads to a non optimum level of work, and therefore you will not able to develop your best. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I finished college, I get a job offer to work in a multinational company. This offer ensured me a good source of experience and some little money throught a five years fulltime contract. I accepted the deal, but one and a half years later, I had to quit due to I felt stuck. The work was boring and routine and I was not able to grow as a professional. So, a secure job offer not always has to be the most suitable offer for you.
Secondly, if the job offer do not satisfy all your pretensions, althought it could be a permanent offer, in my opinion it is preferible to wait to another one that fullfils better your requirements. My own personal history is proof of this. My sencond job offer was incredible, they offered me a competitive salary, medical assistance, bonuses and the possibility of developing a professional career in the engineering field, but the job implied continuous changes of residence and the tasks involved were not totally fullfilling for me. I felt not sure whether to accept it or not, and I finally reject the offer and waited to the perfect one. This came just three days later. On this occasion, the new offer gave me the possibility of work surrounded of experienced engineers throught which I have been able to learn until today.
In conclusion, I believe that everyone has to wait for the best opportunity and not just go for the first one that offer a secure job. In that way everyone can develop their best and reach a successful and fullfilling work life. You never know what is going to happen tomorrow.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, as to, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2011.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 454.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4295154185 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63375064749 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493392070485 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 659.7 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1397430631 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4090909091 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6363636364 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68181818182 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199096093539 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653565877986 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636980653271 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139900720719 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520198171128 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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