Education is most important for our life. Some thinks earlier people used concentrate and preference to children education because of family structure in the past. Today, everyone no matter we rich or not, we want our kids has to study at any cost due changing trend in education system. So, I strongly agree with statement which states now parents are giving more important to children education. Here, I want to give some real example regarding this topic.
First of all, overall education rate increased 50 percent while compare with past few generation, because that awareness parents try to make their kids to at highest level as possible. For example, my grant did not study but he made her daughter to study upto degree level. She inturn made me to study doctor level-that amazing thing no one can doubt it. In the past, actually people had their own business, so the focused their family job rather than other field works. This increase in literacy rate evident that now parents making their children to study at their max.
Secondly, modern world needs more money for the survival, so, to fulfil our needs, we must educate our children otherwise their life become question mark. No parents want their kid should live hand to mouth life which is horrible situation. Even today, to do the simple reception jobs also company asking for minimum master qualification along with good communication skill, so, education became a must one rather than luxury. In the past, the simply sent the kids to good university such Harvard, Oxford and son for their prestige. Now, it is very common everyone to study in good universities.
Thirdly, earlier having little bit knowledge enough run big business because of those reasons they might not focused on children education and it is not their mistake, their customs and they way lived was like that. But, now each every thing is computerised which made world smaller from business to education. Without education, kids cannot do anything now forth coming future, they must need education in order to be in modern world. So, all parents forcing their kids to study well. And, parents feels very proud when their kids are in higher rank officers. In the past education had little to do about happiness.
To conclude, in order to make their education level higher level, to make their kid peaceful and to achieve their inner happiness, parent are giving most their earning to their children. So, definitely, I say that now parents concentrating on children education while compare with past generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, while, as to, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2142.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02816901408 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43195660428 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570422535211 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 663.3 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8100775992 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1304347826 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5217391304 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47826086957 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244670222821 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773009605351 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539158941177 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15674486985 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275831847147 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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