At today's era, people have the power to change society. All people are concern about the decisions what they make because it decides their future. some argue that young people are not enough matured and have no influence on society. While others have the opposite idea that teenagers have a strong effect in today's community. From my perspective, the latter view carries more weight. I take the position on account for the following reasons.
First of all, today we live in a democratic society where youngsters have all rights to vote in the election in order to choose their favorite political party which indirectly shows that, they have control in the society. In the past days, people did not have any right to vote in the election. For instance, if the government make a wrong decision or take any step which might be harmful to society, the youngsters will exhibit a reaction and force the political party to change their decision.
Furthermore, teenagers play a vital role in the development of the nation because youngsters actively participate in various social activities. They are always ready to take part in social activities such as agricultural development or technological development. For example, there was a big community park located in my city but a few years back, the government has decided to build a factory in that place. The construction of the factory would have been harmful to the civilians who were living nearby in that place because the factory might have spread pollution in the surrounding environment. As a result, all young residents of my city decided to protest against the government. They have tried to spread this news on social media, and in response, they got huge support from all over the country. As a result, the government was forced to change the decision that they would not make a factory in place of the community park. Thus, it would not have been possible without the involvement of young people.
Finally, there are various age groups live in our community, but youngsters are the milestone in the society. It is because elders eventually get retired and they less likely to get involved in the community work. Young people would replace those position and it is their responsibilities to take command over society. Also, young people have more strength and they do not afraid to speak the truth in favor of a community which makes them the strongest group in a community.
All in all, from all aforementioned reasons, I strongly believe that adults these days have an important impact on a future decision in a community in term of social and economic concerns. This is because they are more knowledgeable youth in the current society and because they are actively participating in social affairs in order to make a better community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, so, thus, while, as for, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2327.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 471.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94055201699 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72479149852 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47983014862 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 753.3 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5805555113 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.173913043 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4782608696 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.65217391304 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147472450457 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485925282779 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444819533822 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936578413111 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467703738874 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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