TPO-33 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?When teachers assign projects on which students must work together, the students learn much more effectively than when they are asked to work alone on projects.Use spe

Many companies work culture want you to work in team on utiple projects, this method of working in group has proved to
be more efficient than working signle handedly. I think, it is good for students to work in group on projects. This makes them
comfortable working in group, also they can take benefit of variety of skills from team mates. Moreever, they can deliver project in efficently on time.

To begin with, student ultimately want to get prepared for outside world, and working in team gives them idea about company work culture.
As I said before most of companies follow team culture, to work on projects. I think, making student comfortable with working in team, will help
them get good job. During my undergrad, I worked in team of three for my last semester project. It was first time I was working in group but I must admit it was great experience. I learned many things like discussing my idea in grup, convienceing others and many more. This learning was useful when
I started working in my first company and I was quite comfortable with working on real project.

Next thing, that come along working in group is, project benefits from different skills people in the team good at.
Evertone is good at something, when we work in group we can take advantage of this and use this skills to make project stand out with flying colors.
I would like to extend same example that I explained above, one of my team mate was good at UI design and other was in database.
We used their skills to make project better.

Moreover, you can deliver project effeciently on time. Many hands working together makes it take less time.

Finally, with all reasons I discussed above I think it is good idea to make student work in group on project. This helps them to acquire skills, which are useful in their career.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 18, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the companies') or simply say ''most companies''.
Suggestion: most of the companies; most companies
...company work culture. As I said before most of companies follow team culture, to work on project...
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Line 6, column 101, Rule ID: COMFORTABLE_WITH_VBG[1]
Message: Use simply 'comfortable working'.
Suggestion: comfortable working
...rk on projects. I think, making student comfortable with working in team, will help them get good job. ...
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Line 8, column 55, Rule ID: COMFORTABLE_WITH_VBG[1]
Message: Use simply 'comfortable working'.
Suggestion: comfortable working
...ing in my first company and I was quite comfortable with working on real project. Next thing, that ...
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Line 12, column 92, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...p we can take advantage of this and use this skills to make project stand out with f...
^^^^

Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'i think', 'to begin with']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.220055710306 0.229887763892 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.194986072423 0.158761421928 123% => OK
Adjectives: 0.091922005571 0.0866891130778 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0306406685237 0.046263068375 66% => OK
Pronouns: 0.100278551532 0.0685040099705 146% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.150417827298 0.118717715034 127% => OK
Participles: 0.041782729805 0.0351676179071 119% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.36125550598 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0306406685237 0.0309702414327 99% => OK
Particles: 0.00278551532033 0.00188951952338 147% => OK
Determiners: 0.025069637883 0.0887237588012 28% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0194986072423 0.0209618222197 93% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.008356545961 0.0139019557991 60% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1824.0 2387.08602151 76% => OK
No of words: 322.0 408.028673835 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66459627329 5.86048508987 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.313664596273 0.338922669872 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.226708074534 0.251872472559 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.11801242236 0.174417080927 68% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0776397515528 0.112833075102 69% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36125550598 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524397521467 95% => OK
Word variations: 50.9400462374 59.2087087015 86% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.9473684211 20.5533526081 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8136312336 48.84282405 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 120.699889404 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9473684211 20.5533526081 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.473684210526 0.644075263715 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.5376344086 286% => There are something wrong with the essay format.
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 39.6181758745 45.7405998639 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.26495726496 1.45489161554 87% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163063200011 0.300154397459 54% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0844059367231 0.103427244359 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0681269057297 0.0752933317313 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.668553254424 0.497263757937 134% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.258958154525 0.151897553556 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672073878283 0.114077575197 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595581393571 0.0781384742642 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.142000244355 0.336927656856 42% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0890281885566 0.067059652881 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0807500275146 0.210909579961 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545628463139 0.0618886996521 88% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 14.0 8.42114695341 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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