TPO-33 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?When teachers assign projects on which students must work together, the students learn much more effectively than when they are asked to work alone on projects.Use spe

As being a student i prefer given assignment in group but sometimes it is good to do alone because of some reasons which i will explore in the following paragraph.

First,when students are given works or assignment in group then it will be beneficial for all level of students.For example if there is one talent student in a class and if teacher provide assignment for all the students in a class that student can easily and quickly finish the project but other average and weak students cant solve the same project easily its will be difficult for them.But if the teacher provide any work and encourage them to do in group then all students get chance to involve and participate so that each individual can express their ideas and views on the subject matter.When students do work in group they can also maintain intimacy relation with their friends and learn to cooperate with team.They will be able to ascertain the mistake and good conclusion on the specific matter.By helping to each others on writing and teaching it will help them to develop leadership.They also become confident to speak infront of mass.

Second,some students may prefer to do the project alone they don't want anyone to get involve with them.Doing something alone is also good because some students may feel irritation when they are surrounded with many and they cant concentrate on their work.To some students reading or doing assignment alone may be effective they can generate many ideas and thoughts when they are in peace environment.Some may have problem of forgetting when they are with many friends.For those type of students it is the best way to do assignment alone so that they can conclude with effective point.So for these reasons i agree with both giving assignment in group or individual.

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Average: 6 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 52.1666666667 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 929.0 1977.66487455 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 191.0 407.700716846 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86387434555 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 4.48103885553 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65261665142 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 212.727598566 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575916230366 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 618.680645161 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 20.6003584229 10% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 95.0 20.1344086022 472% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 392.0 48.9658058833 801% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 464.5 100.406767564 463% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 95.5 20.6045352989 463% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.5 5.45110844103 394% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262615239462 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.196225360702 0.076458572812 257% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450816401429 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196225360702 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450816401429 0.0645574589148 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 49.2 11.7677419355 418% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -16.49 58.1214874552 -28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 39.2 10.1575268817 386% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.09 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.74 8.01818996416 146% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 86.8835125448 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 10.002688172 265% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 40.0 10.0537634409 398% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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