TPO 36 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to finish a project completely and then begin another project than to work on two or more projects at the same time. Use specific reasons and examples to.
I completely agree with the statement that finishing the project is better than doing two or more project at the same time. And this attitude has some advantages like one can concentrate on his work more and also, he would have enough time to gain any useful knowledge and skills that help him to be master in his work. In the following paragraph, I will shed light on the arguments to support my view.
The first point to be mentioned is that one of the most important factors for the success of a project is that one should focus on his work in order to complete the project on time. By working on only one project you are more concentrated and focused and your purposes achievable during a period of time that you must finish them. In contrast, when you do several projects together, your mind often time wanders from one goal to another and consequently, you might not fulfill your aims. For instance, in today’s marketing, many consultants suggest the companies choose one product and dedicate most of their time and energy in order to be the best brand in their country and world. Because, nowadays, you confront with a diversity of brands in the market for an only special product. A company that makes a different perfume should concentrate on improving its work, not producing a lot of products such as clothes and shoes and so on. Because its competitors in the perfume industry may defeat them in the market with their high quality of perfumes.
The second reason that deserves some words is that when you give your all attention on one project you would have sufficient time to learn many skills and more knowledge about your target. Every project has different aspects and one who wants to succeed should allocate his time to achieve some important information related to his work. If you work on a different project, your information would be shallow and you could not gain considerable success and your results will be moderate and unsatisfying. For instance, your company asked you for designing a new building that would more practical for holding seminars and an international conference. You have to consider many angels for accomplishing your project in the right way. Therefore, you should allocate a lot of time to study and participate in many meetings with your supervisors and boss. If you do some another project at the same time, definitely, every one of your projects will have some weaknesses because you ignore some important aspect of your projects due to the insufficient time and energy.
By the way of conclusion, base on the arguments that explored above, I am of the opinion that doing one project has many merits such as focusing better on our work and dedicating more time to gain enough information for running our work in the best way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 290, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...d and your purposes achievable during a period of time that you must finish them. In contrast,...
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Line 2, column 943, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ts such as clothes and shoes and so on. Because its competitors in the perfume industry...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, for instance, in contrast, such as, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2305.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 481.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7920997921 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68313059816 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62553846363 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463617463617 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 729.9 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.854084417 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.055555556 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7222222222 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333912783323 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130742776461 0.076458572812 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138466908182 0.0737576698707 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234346337327 0.150856017488 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796833012928 0.0645574589148 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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