TPO-41 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Teaching are the most important task that not any one can do it, It needs a person who have special characteristics and personality to allow him do this job with confident. Some people believe that teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than nowadays. In my opinion I agree with that statement for the following reasons.

First, In the past few teachers were available for the society. this was due to few number of students were attending collage and most of them was working in rural area, this add a positive advantage for the graduated teachers and get more respect from all population. For example, I remember when i was in the school, we have teachers from different country, like Egypt, Sudan, Iraq. this was due to the fact that no Yemeni teachers were graduated yet. Those teachers were get much higher respect from my family and from the community in general, Every one try to invite them for lunch or dinner, and I remember every day on morning i took breakfast for them to their home, As you can see, this reflect how much were the teacher were respected and appreciated from my community.

Secondly, high salary rates for teachers in the past than today. In the past as i mentioned earlier there were a few teachers and most of them was from foreign countries, This jeopardize the government to gave them higher salaries. Moreover, this advantage made them stopped thinking for a private lessons for students, As a result all community was looking for them as a rich people, and you know rich people always get respects from others. For instance, I hired a teacher for my kids, one time i talked to him how was our teachers in the past and how we was respect him, He told me that this was because they have a lot of money, but nowadays, all teacher seeking for another job, and they aren't satisfied with what they doing, he says that what bring me her to teach your kids, in order to get extra money. For that reason, teachers nowadays get less valued by society.

In sum, though some disagree with the idea that teachers in the past more appreciated by society, I believe that teachers in the past were more respected and valued by their community, not because they get a high salary rate, but also there were few teachers in the past than today. We should all respect teachers because those are the candle that burn itself in order to light for others.

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Average: 6.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Teaching are the most important task that not any on...
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...available for the society. this was due to few number of students were attending c...
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...erent country, like Egypt, Sudan, Iraq. this was due to the fact that no Yemeni teac...
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...tself in order to light for others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in general, you know, as a result, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1978.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61072261072 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38435902894 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452214452214 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 611.1 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.5601011343 48.9658058833 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.866666667 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6 20.6045352989 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.45110844103 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237161763308 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108654421579 0.076458572812 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881258030384 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193427797048 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784680127486 0.0645574589148 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.1575268817 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.05 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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