During the school, I had a lot of problem with history subject. It was really exhausting for me to know about what was happened in the past. Soon after I learned that history has effect on our running life, even if it happened hundreds years ago so we should know them and get conclusion about them. Now how can we accept that events that are happening right now in the world can not to effect on over life? It is not only important to be aware about them, but also in some cases it is necessary to search and be in the picture about what is in progress in the world around us.
Every corners of the world have a direct or indirect connection with each other in different way. For instance: commercial relations, economical relations, political relations and so on. In this case every infinitesimal event in the world can effect on us in one possible way. If we don’t know what is in progress, how can we get benefit from them or prevent negative effects of them on our life?
Humanity is in the pledge of awareness of what is happening now in the world. Half of people in the world are struggling to survive because of war, poverty, malnutrition, oppression and so on. They really need philanthropically helps. If we say that now our life is going normal so why should we be worried about others, how can we name ourselves a human?
If the western countries are using new equipment a machines, southern countries are affected by earth that is getting warm day by day. If some countries are producing greenhouse gases, the ozone layer is getting thicker in all over the world. Not only humans, but also animals are affected by events which are happening in the world.
These are a part of importance that news and being aware of our surrounding world has. Even if we aren’t influenced by them directly, at least we can see which events can have which results and take lesson from them. so try to know every important thing in your small world, especially those which are about your field of work or study. Any way its positive result are much more than its negative ones
- In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: "Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.” 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of problems'.
Suggestion: a lot of problems
During the school, I had a lot of problem with history subject. It was really exh...
Line 4, column 135, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
...ay. For instance: commercial relations, economical relations, political relations and so o...
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
..., how can we name ourselves a human? If the western countries are using new e...
Line 10, column 50, Rule ID: A_PLURAL
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a machine' or simply 'machines'?
Suggestion: a machine; machines
...stern countries are using new equipment a machines, southern countries are affected by ear...
Line 10, column 136, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... earth that is getting warm day by day. If some countries are producing greenhouse...
Line 13, column 223, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
...hich results and take lesson from them. so try to know every important thing in yo...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, at least, for instance, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57294429708 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52531874535 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514588859416 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4058513656 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.85 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197359133251 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636806438753 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441180134277 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113218016666 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435795027565 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.