TPO-50
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As everything in life is like a coin that has two different sides, people must weigh the pros and cons before jumping to conclusions. After all, all the questions or topic requires some careful deliberations in that there are multiple variables to a truth. Even though some may adamantly believe that all university students should take history courses because it helps in better understanding our society, I believe that this claim lacks coherence to some extent. It is my firm belief that all university students don’t necessarily need to take history courses for a myriad of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent passages.
To begin with, history is not necessary for all the students from a variety of major, because it is not equally relevant to their concentration. Needless to say, most, if not all, students from science background will be more interested in studying physics, chemistry or math rather than the historical events from the previous times. History should be chosen by those students who actually interested in studying those events from former times. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. For example, from my school days, I was very much fascinated about machines and aircrafts. I had decided to pursue my career as a mechanical engineer over many other choices and went to an engineering university. If I were forced to choose a history course in my curriculum, what contribution do you think would it make? It would serve no purpose in being a mechanical engineer. Additionally, it would be a waste of time. Hence, university curriculum should be designed according to the field of study.
Secondly, if the university students concentrate more on their respected field, they are more close to their success. In this modern era, in the eyes of most of the people, it is believed that students with more specialized and advanced knowledge of their respective concentration will be more successful in their professional life. Take my father as an example. My father is a renowned doctor in our city with a specialization in cardiac. He often tells me about his journey of his medical life and becoming a cardiac specialist by more and more studying the human heart. It is clear as day to me that he wouldn’t have been such specialist if he were forced to study history rather than his area of interest.
In summary, yes, it is virtually impossible to provide a satisfactory explanation to an open minded question. However, I believe that all university students shouldn’t be required to choose a history course if they are not interested regardless their field of study because it is not equally crucial for all major fields.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, after all, for example, in summary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2449.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 473.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17758985201 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.5174659644 2.67179642975 132% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517970401691 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 781.2 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3832436517 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.318181818 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04545454545 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239576026808 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733031240515 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590698864338 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155756849279 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262523232554 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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