TPO-7
Nowadays, along with science's development a lot of students at their schools are focusing on the new and creative idea and concepts. Whereas, these days, students spend more time at the school, it is very important what they learned. Although most of people believe that the students should understand the idea and concepts more than facts; but, I think the student should grow up in all-out area of their lives both science and daily lives.
First of all, I believe everyone should commit to their responsibilities in their lives, On the other hand, the students are future's men and women, and the school should prepare them for bigger works and matter decisions in their lives, their cities, their countries and even in the total of world. Hence, they need to learn honesty, communication manners, ethic works, and committing to their responsibilities and so on. I think school is the best place for learning these manners, because they are communicating with more people than their families and the student when they interact with together more easily learn and this way is more attractive for them than another ways.
But, it is a fact that every country or generally societies need to progression in diverse area such as medical, industrial, sciences and so on. Hence, the schools are required to prepare the students in order to accept the matter works in these important fields.
In fact, I believe the students should learn interested idea and concepts at their schools to can continue them at university and can progress; but, unfortunately some families and schools forced the students at an especial area which has more concept and idea such as mathematics, physics or medical than areas that engage the students with facts such as literature of history and so on.
I think all students need to learn facts and they can based on their interesting select an area that have idea and concept and parents and school should not limit them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 244, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...y important what they learned. Although most of people believe that the students should unders...
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Line 5, column 55, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'base'
Suggestion: base
...udents need to learn facts and they can based on their interesting select an area tha...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, so, whereas, i think, in fact, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9512195122 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56853558947 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478658536585 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.9671849616 48.9658058833 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.4 100.406767564 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8 20.6045352989 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.45110844103 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 11.7677419355 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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