there are myriad factors or considerations which take into that, nowadays world which is more important taking risks and quickly work done or take time and work done in slowly. As far as I concerned according to the following reason and from my personal experiences, I am of the conviction that nowadays it is more important to work fast and take the risk then work slow and done correctly. someone can concisely wight each side pros and cons, the reason will following the essay.
The first exquisite reason which gives adherents to my viewpoint with examples. today the world is now changing at very fast passe if someone tries to do work in slowly he will be getting behind very easily my experience is the best example of this, I recently got some extra bonus from my offices as me and my friend try to figure it how where to spend money, my friend starts investing is money on to give as a loan and he said that in that way is money will be saved for a long time and he will get back is money with extra money on top the money and me invested my money on bit coins as they are more riskyr then give money as loan but if money comes back it will be much faster a and more money andsuccesfully get back my all money and extra money also as I insvsted money again on the bit coin some time money come back some time not but at least I have not to wait too long for this.
Apart from the fact mentioned above, one should mention another subtle point meticulously pertaining huge experience.
the noteworthy refreshing statistics revealed by a recent social research conducted in my county shows that the majority of people are agreed in the fact that it is more imported that to take risks and do work quickly. to shed more light on the issue, according to the study in Delhi University, by working faster people can save their valuable time and can use is time for other work but only in the right way not to make the bad shortcut.
Admittedly, someone may have justifications on that by slow work they don't have to worry about risks that made the quick decision they did not want to do the things differently they want to use old and safe way for work. I still affirm that nowadays work quickly and risk is more benefit than working slowly.
In summary, for all aforementioned reason, one can infer that work quickly and risk making mistakes is much better than work slowly and make sure that everything is correct people can save a lot of there time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, still, then, apart from, at least, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2005.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 455.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40659340659 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34670323238 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468131868132 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 642.6 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.1344086022 204% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 194.356322679 48.9658058833 397% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 182.272727273 100.406767564 182% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.3636363636 20.6045352989 201% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286644039321 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137789642681 0.076458572812 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127430147834 0.0737576698707 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178532255118 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135703412447 0.0645574589148 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 11.7677419355 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.1575268817 166% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.19 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.0537634409 183% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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