travelling to a foreign country which is tourist spot or another which is qiet have traditional values.
By and large, it is established beyond doubt that human are social animal and thriving hard to sustain their life and raise their living standards. In this regard, travelling to a foreign country on a vacation is of paramount importance. There are different schools of thoughts amongst people, where some consider to plan their trip at a peaceful part of a foreign country, others contemplate to go to a country where life is vibrant and place is a tourist spot. If i were asked, I would delve into most crucial reasons to substantiate my viewpoint.
The first reason corroborating my idea is associated with the notion the notion that people will have many new experiences if they travel to a country where there are tons of others people and is a tourist spot. To be more specific, at a place life this there are people from different walks of life all over the world. It is noticeable that people get a chance to learn different languages. Not only they can meet natives people and learn their language but also strengthen their relationship with them. Vididly, meeting them in person develop their friendships and social skills. By the way of illustration, Last year, I got a chance to travel to Canada. I was overjoyed to meet the Canadians. Before that I just just read English language in my school, I personally hear their accent and tried to learn the commonly used slangs. i stayed in a hotel and luckily was able to find an extremely polite girl, Kathy, and we became friends. we are still in touch and talked to each other on skype even i came back after a month. If I had not gone to Canada, I would not experiences all that amazing things.
Second compelling reason behind my opinion is rooted in the fact that travelling to a foreign country with full of attraction and tourism opportunities doubles the fun of life. It is axiomatic that every country has their customs and specialities. Living at one country deprive the people to avail the beauties of other countries. To be more specific, when i went to Canada, I was astonished to see the life of Toronto and natural beauty of Niagara falls. It was my first time seeing a fall and experiencing freezing weather.Not to mention their are many shopping centres from where i bought gifts for my all relatives and restaurant that provided me a chance to experience the robust flavor of scrupulous food. I can never forget that taste of food. surprisingly, canadians are extremely hostile and i enjoyed every moment of my travel their. It is crystal clear that ai had chosen to go to a quiet place, I would not have that much fun.
By perusin above paragraphs, one can infer that visiting to a country which is a tourist spot is profitable for myriad reasons. For the sake of brevity, few points are worth reiterating. First, people will get to learn many amazing experiences. Second, this trip would be full of enjoyment. As for writer’s opinion, I vehemently urge people to travel to a tourist spot to cherish their life with mesmerising and wonderful experiences.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, still, then, as for, by and large, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2514.0 1977.66487455 127% => OK
No of words: 532.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72556390977 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80261649409 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69943922502 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498120300752 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 782.1 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0678523593 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6896551724 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3448275862 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72413793103 5.45110844103 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159425549514 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379398570157 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595567512026 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11014251219 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369621928191 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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