Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Different individuals have different characteristics. It is hard to make a simple and absolute conclusion for every individual just according to some phenomena, especially for human beings. Thus, in my opinion, the statement that young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives is not fair and objective.
First of all, everyone has his own situations and properties. I admit that some teens are good at making decisions, but others are not. This is because there are so many factors to determine characteristics of a person, such as education resources in his community and economic power of his family. Moreover, even if they are twins in a family, they could be different in their views of this world. Therefore, it is possible for every young adult to have a good ability to make decisions for his own life.
In addition, some parents still have a major influence on children's decisions. Education is a very good example. With the increasing importance of education in such times, parents pay more attention to cultivating their children. Some parents with high-thinking and open minds tend to believe in their children and give them enough freedom. However, some parents behave oppositely. They always want to plan a bright future for their child. Walking on a seemingly easy road, how could they become good decision-makers? For instance, those students involved in the biggest America's college admissions scandal in 2019 may be not able to make decisions about their universities, let alone make decisions for their own lives.
Besides their parents, there are many other factors to affect young people's decisions. Especially in this time with a highly sophisticated technology, information travels at a surprisingly high speed, whether it is true or not. People are easily influenced by the information from surrounding people or on websites. What's more, according to psychologists, young people are more prone to follow it and make decisions based on it, because they have not wholly developed their ideals and values. This can partly explain advertising’s efficiency and success on the youths. Their unwise and excessive consuming is a kind of reflection of their decision-making disabilities.
I believe that some young people are better decision makers, but they cannot represent all their peers. After all, they have different personalities, and their parents and the information they get would influence their decisions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, after all, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as, first of all, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2084.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32992327366 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04253246711 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542199488491 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 657.9 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.448575066 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8333333333 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2916666667 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316211296227 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884436570574 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850908210927 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191184261672 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523983375831 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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