Which one of the following values is the most important to share with a young child (5-10 years old)?
1.being helpful
2.Being honest
3.Being well organized
As we all know that a child during his age of 5-10 is not mature psychologically and physically, and therefore it is easy for them to be influence and directed by other people like parents. In the occasion, it is the proper values which should be instilled for children that seems to be of paramount importance. So when it comes to the option that which values is the most important to share with a young child: being helpful, honest or well organized, I prefer to honesty.
Admittedly, helpfulness and well organization, in some extent, are not without advantage. First, helpfulness could make children help others in the future which may bring some friendship to them. However, thinking carefully, we could find that nowadays, people are less innocent than before, so some people may take it for granted, which may hurt the children themselves psychologically. Second, well organization is also somewhat important. But, many people without well organization are also successful in the society and the other people who have well organization don’t think this kind of values or qualities could help them a lot from a survey made by a authority institution. On the other hand, honesty is most important for child for following two reasons.
Initially, honesty is the most essential value of each person. Nowadays, the society is a credit society and therefore only a person who is honest can establish himself in the society. You need be honest on business, with bank, and with people. You also need pay you credit card in time and if you do without this, it may influence much things in your life and you may have a sign of dishonesty form others’ view. In addition, being honest is an essential quality when you socialize with others, such as your parent, relatives, friends, classmates or teachers, anyone among them may not be willing to set up a good relationship with you if you are not honest. Actually, honesty is basic bond among the relationships and no one wants to be cheated and deceived. Once in a relationship, one betray the other, they may not be friends longer. Therefore young child should be share the values of honesty.
On top of that, honesty may be beneficial for children’s future career. In contemporary society, many companies regard whether their employees own the honesty as a standard of their behavior. In most cases, the leaders prefer to the employee who is enough honest and honest people could get a faster promotion. For example, a true story of my friend, Li, after his graduation, he applied for a company. And during the interview of that company, he confronted the situation set up by this company which is in order to mature the degree of people. Due to constant honesty of him, my friend passed the exam smoothly and was recruited by this company eventually. Simultaneously, his interviewer praised him and take well care of him in the following career.
Based on above debate and discussion, we can draw the conclusion that being honest is the most important value which should be shared with young child, not only because it is essential quality of on person but also because it is beneficial for his future career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 34.0 15.1003584229 225% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2630.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 539.0 407.700716846 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87940630798 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81833721656 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79115790887 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473098330241 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 814.5 618.680645161 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3579514471 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.2 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.56 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.96 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 11.8709677419 194% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.421421524066 0.236089414692 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123200869294 0.076458572812 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114966355439 0.0737576698707 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258904170479 0.150856017488 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123693528977 0.0645574589148 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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