Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Worker are the builder of our nation as they are working tirelessly. There are many kinds of job is available from small to large and it follows a fixed routine. Different classes of people do different types of job. The people are love to do different jobs rather than doing only a single job is the given statement- with this someone would agree, others would disagree. In my opinion, doing many job is not bring a cumulative benefits for both the industry and the worker. I think in this way for the following two important reason.
The main reason is that it contributes to diminish working capacity by time when a person doing different job in every single day. We are human not a robot, we have to depends on our brain to direct our task and on our body to supply ATP (energy currency). For example, I was grown up in a joint family where my father was the only earner. From the childhood days, I have seen, he worked different job at a time from taking school class to teaching students and also sometimes he did administrative job. For doing this same routine, he lost his energy and enthusiasm very early in his career. Finally, he quit from this multitasking job and joined a fixed job to relieve this burden. As you can see that, doing more job in every day caused down my father vitality and impacted a lots to our family.
Another reason is that there is also a little room to develop skill when a person is engage to do a variety of job at a time. Skill is the epithet of a person because it determines the person position in an industry. So, requiring particular adeptness is a paramount importance. To be more specific, my cousin was joined a pharmaceutical industry a few years ago. In addition, he used to handle many department at a time. Later, he did not have the chance to shine his specific job caliber. Although he changed his job but as he had no particular job skill most of the company was refusing to accept his resume. This experience taught me that particular job skill is more important in order to get hire by a renowned company and also getting high job facilities.
In conclusion, it is quite normal to argue with me by taking an opposite side but in long run doing many job will not be a good choice. Doing single work not only save persons energy but also give him a space to make him an expert on a particular area of job. So, we should concern on this issue to get a greater benefits.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 8, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
Worker are the builder of our nation as they are w...
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Line 1, column 94, Rule ID: MANY_KINDS_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'jobs'?
Suggestion: jobs
...ing tirelessly. There are many kinds of job is available from small to large and it...
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Line 1, column 394, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun job seems to be countable; consider using: 'many jobs'.
Suggestion: many jobs
...rs would disagree. In my opinion, doing many job is not bring a cumulative benefits for ...
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Line 1, column 429, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'benefit'?
Suggestion: benefit
...oing many job is not bring a cumulative benefits for both the industry and the worker. I...
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Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'depend'.
Suggestion: depend
...y. We are human not a robot, we have to depends on our brain to direct our task and on ...
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Line 3, column 719, Rule ID: ANINFOR_EVERY_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in everyday'?
Suggestion: in everyday
...en. As you can see that, doing more job in every day caused down my father vitality and impa...
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Line 3, column 776, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...ed down my father vitality and impacted a lots to our family. Another reason is that...
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Line 4, column 86, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'engaged'.
Suggestion: engaged
... room to develop skill when a person is engage to do a variety of job at a time. Skill...
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Line 4, column 396, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun department seems to be countable; consider using: 'many departments'.
Suggestion: many departments
...ars ago. In addition, he used to handle many department at a time. Later, he did not have the c...
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Line 6, column 101, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun job seems to be countable; consider using: 'many jobs'.
Suggestion: many jobs
... an opposite side but in long run doing many job will not be a good choice. Doing single...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, thus, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1981.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 449.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41202672606 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49647545958 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498886414254 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 655.2 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5566813419 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5416666667 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7083333333 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04166666667 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177258569405 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562153223688 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526958015965 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113927498061 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456041133143 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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