Would you prefer to live in a traditional house or in a modern apartment building Use specific reasons and details to support your choice

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Would you prefer to live in a traditional house or in a modern apartment building? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.

When it comes the issue the selection between a traditional house and a modern apartment, some people think that advantages of modern houses are more than that of the traditional houses. However, others have the opposite view. As far as I am concerned, the former point carries more weight. The main reasons for this choice is that energy consume and security as well as comfortable.

First and the most important reasons is that you can have comfortable life in a modern apartment. In fact, this kind of apartment put many facilities at your disposal, which makes your life comfortable. I thin that a small example can give some light on this matter. In a modern house you are able to control electronic appliances such as stove, television, light with your smartphone. In addition, air conditioner is automatic and rooms temperature are adjust in the standard norm.

A further point we must consider is that a modern apartment assists us to save money. These houses are optimized for energy consumption, so that use of them is economical. I think that there is not a better instance than myself, when I was living in a traditional house. At that time, I had faced many problems, especially in winter. In this season, I had to use much gas to keep house temperature in standard norm, while my house always so cold because of non-isolated walls. In addition, it was quite normal that I had to pay much for town gas bills. After two years, I moved to another city and purchased an apartment, which was equipped with new technology. This house had double glazed windows, isolated walls, automatic electronic system, which control house temperature and light, and special design, which decrease the energy use as much as possible. So, it was quite normal that I was able to pay less for energy, which was desirable for me.

Apart form points I made above, a modern house has high security system. Indeed, smart electronic system in these kinds of houses allows us to live in safe environment. For instance, the smart alarming system does not allow some one to enter the house, unless who knows the password. Moreover, plenty of cameras in the house let us to have remote aces and be aware of what is happened in there..

All above evidence supports this undeniable that a modern apartment is more safety, comfortable, and economical. Last but not least, I hope that next generation become more responsible to safeguard their environment by use the modern apartment.

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Average: 7.7 (12 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Apart from
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'as to', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'kind of', 'such as', 'as well as']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.224318658281 0.229887763892 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.138364779874 0.158761421928 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.134171907757 0.0866891130778 155% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0461215932914 0.046263068375 100% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0587002096436 0.0685040099705 86% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121593291405 0.118717715034 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0146750524109 0.0351676179071 42% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.69560465388 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0230607966457 0.0309702414327 74% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0859538784067 0.0887237588012 97% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0062893081761 0.0209618222197 30% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0188679245283 0.0139019557991 136% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2477.0 2387.08602151 104% => OK
No of words: 422.0 408.028673835 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.86966824645 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.336492890995 0.338922669872 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.229857819905 0.251872472559 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.165876777251 0.174417080927 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.127962085308 0.112833075102 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69560465388 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53317535545 0.524397521467 102% => OK
Word variations: 61.0769680474 59.2087087015 103% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.347826087 20.5533526081 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7332357633 48.84282405 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.695652174 120.699889404 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.347826087 20.5533526081 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.695652173913 0.644075263715 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 41.3336080775 45.7405998639 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.48275862069 1.45489161554 102% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324824988061 0.300154397459 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0943196518695 0.103427244359 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0653355803297 0.0752933317313 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.460505029563 0.497263757937 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.129229853851 0.151897553556 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107539482802 0.114077575197 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706966938859 0.0781384742642 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.232116570946 0.336927656856 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0714325432735 0.067059652881 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197808478387 0.210909579961 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683496996108 0.0618886996521 110% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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