Your school has enough money to purchase either computers for students or books for the library. Which should your school choose to buy —computers or books? Use specific reasons and examples to support your recommendation.
In my opinion, I believe that our school should purchase more books for the library. I feel this way for many reasons,which I will explore in the following essay.
First and foremost, textbooks and learning materials are much more needed than laptops for pupils. Although students can access a huge amount of information through the internet, some new up-to-date publications are not available on the web. Furthermore, a fee might be required to use certain resources. Thus, enriching the library with more areas of knowledge would be more beneficial than just providing students with electronic devices. College attendees could also benefit from the money that they would save by putting it into housing bills or tuition fees. My own experience is a compelling example on that. When I was in studying pharmacy in the university, we had an assignment in biology. The professor recommended some books which were unfortunately checked out from the library and they did not have any other copies. As a result, every student in our group had to pitch in to afford the cost of these references, which were extremely expensive. Had the library offered enough copies, we would have been able to complete our research without having to spend out-of-pocket expenses.
Secondly, computers are accessible everywhere such as in public libraries and most public places for free. Moreover, thanks to the reduction in gadgets' prices that was guaranteed through commercialization and private competition, most people nowadays possess more than one computer and machines today are no longer exclusive property for specific institutions. Besides, smartphones reach processing speeds now that allow them to do most of the tasks that only computers were capable of. We could surf the internet, watch educational videos, finish training quizes and download e-books to read on our device at any given time. In addition, installing more computers on campus would occupy space, which could be better utilized for encouraging learners to practice sports such as having a gym to exercise or a court for basketball or football. More importantly, if the school acquired portable laptops and gave permission for students to take them home, students might use them for non-educational purposes like social media and video games.
To conclude, I am of the view that more books for the library should take the precedence over buying computers for students. This is mainly due to the fact that most individuals have their own computers and increasing the library inventory would help students to save tons of time and money to get the academic resources for their projects.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...ibrary. I feel this way for many reasons,which I will explore in the following essay. ...
^^^^^^
Line 13, column 342, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... academic resources for their projects.
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, i feel, in addition, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2234.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 425.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25647058824 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84078647914 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604705882353 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 692.1 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0585247582 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.7 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.65 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262298507744 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749419623925 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715744697292 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1849550195 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609456867907 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 86.8835125448 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.