airships can be widely used nowadays
According to the reading, airships can be widely used nowadays for three important reasons but the professor makes all the ideas dubious and presents some evidence to refute them all. First of all, the reading passage claims that airships consume less fuel because they can be used just in vertical lift, but on the opposite side, the lecturer brings up this idea that although airships need less fuel but they are some especial lighter gases such as Hydrogen and Helium.
The first one, Hydrogen; fires easily so leads in tragic accidents and the second, Helium; is difficult to obtain. As a result, economic solutions for safety and cost make it unpleasant to use airships.
Furthermore, the reading holds the view that airships can pick up heavy logs. On the contrary, the lecturer dismisses this idea due to the fact that carrying for example three logs in a forest can not carry on in a steady and safety way without crashing as the result of forces of surrounded trees such as balloons can not.
Finally, the reading declares that airships are a good replacement of satellites. On the opposite side, the lecturer holds the view that airships can rise virtually 14 km above the surface and there are strong winds at this distance, so the airship needs much fuel to resist against the winds. As a result, the airship consumes the fuel quickly and should come back to the earth for refreshing. So, airships can not provide uninterrupted information such as satellites.
To sum up, it is clear that the reading passage and the lecturer can not see each other on the same ground.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, second, so, for example, such as, as a result, first of all, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1373.03311258 94% => OK
No of words: 273.0 270.72406181 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71794871795 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37661481481 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512820512821 0.540411800872 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.9 419.366225166 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 13.0662251656 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 273.0 21.2450331126 1285% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.2860985944 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1288.0 110.228320801 1168% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 273.0 21.698381199 1258% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 125.0 7.06452816374 1769% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368843837183 0.272083759551 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.368843837183 0.0996497079465 370% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170429360038 0.162205337803 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104294877346 0.0443174109184 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 137.3 13.3589403974 1028% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -197.16 53.8541721854 -366% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 5.55761589404 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 108.6 11.0289183223 985% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.58 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.3 8.42419426049 241% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 54.0 63.6247240618 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 51.0 10.7273730684 475% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 111.2 10.498013245 1059% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 51.0 11.2008830022 455% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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