moon Br

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moon Br

different theories theories " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">were suggested for how moon formed in the passage while, in lecture it it " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">is explained that why these theories are not adequate. The speaker contradicts the author with regards to lunar formation theories by giving specific reasons and examples.

Firstly, the speaker points out that as per author, moon moon " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">was formed by fission. In early age of earth moon might be rapidly spinning. A piece of earth from pacific ocean would have have " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">sperated forming moon. The speaker states that this is misconception. In reality, this was not possible. Such fisson could shatter earth. Furthermore, he gave evidence of Apollo mission. composition of rocks collected by them were completely different that earth rock.

Secondly, he opposes the co-acceration theory. earth and moon are sisters formed during Nebula interstellar event. he clarifies in practice if these two have formed during this event, it would have same core composition. earth have 50%n iron iron " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">whereas moon have 25% iron as their core material. Additionally, he said that gravitational force will have fused them together by using dust and gas.

Thirdly, the speaker denies the validity of the point that averred in the passage. Giant impact theory suggest that some mars sized planed striked earth 4.5 billion years ago. impact created many pieces, later they fused to form moon. it is quiet contrary. speaker contradicts this theory by saying that. if if " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">this had happened in past moon moon " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">will not be same as today. it it " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">must be like different pieces. moon, that is harder than earth, have its own biochemical process.

speaker suggests that much research needed because none of these theory is convincing. Hence in conclusion, after this holistic analysis speaker lucidly substantiates his points of view with cogency.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Different
different theories theories ' style='co...
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Suggestion: theories
different theories theories ' style='color: rgb51, 51, 51...
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Suggestion: it
...formed in the passage while, in lecture it it ' style='color: rgb51, 51, 51...
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Suggestion: moon
... speaker points out that as per author, moon moon ' style='color: rgb51, 51, 51...
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Suggestion: have
...piece of earth from pacific ocean would have have ' style='color: rgb51, 51, 51...
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Suggestion: had
... of earth from pacific ocean would have have ' style='color: rgb51, 51, 51...
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Suggestion: Composition
...re, he gave evidence of Apollo mission. composition of rocks collected by them were complet...
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Suggestion: Earth
...y, he opposes the co-acceration theory. earth and moon are sisters formed during Neb...
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...earth and moon are sisters formed during Nebula interstellar event. he clarifies ...
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...rmed during Nebula interstellar event. he clarifies in practice if these two have...
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Suggestion: cored
...d during this event, it would have same core composition. earth have 50%n iron iron ...
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Suggestion: Earth
...t, it would have same core composition. earth have 50%n iron iron ' style='...
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Suggestion: iron
... same core composition. earth have 50%n iron iron ' style='color: rgb51, 51, 51...
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Suggestion: Impact
...ed striked earth 4.5 billion years ago. impact created many pieces, later they fused t...
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Suggestion: It
... pieces, later they fused to form moon. it is quiet contrary. speaker contradicts ...
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Suggestion: Speaker
...sed to form moon. it is quiet contrary. speaker contradicts this theory by saying that....
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Suggestion: If
...contradicts this theory by saying that. if if ' style='color: rgb51, 51,...
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Suggestion: if
...contradicts this theory by saying that. if if ' style='color: rgb51, 51, 51...
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...tradicts this theory by saying that. if if ' style='color: rgb51, 51, 51...
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Line 13, column 467, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
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Suggestion: moon
...255;'>this had happened in past moon moon ' style='color: rgb51, 51, 51...
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Suggestion: It
...55;'>will not be same as today. it it ' style='color: rgb51, 51,...
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Suggestion: it
...55;'>will not be same as today. it it ' style='color: rgb51, 51, 51...
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Suggestion: Moon
...apos;>must be like different pieces. moon, that is harder than earth, have its ow...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Speaker
...have its own biochemical process. speaker suggests that much research needed beca...
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Line 17, column 60, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this theory' or 'these theories'?
Suggestion: this theory; these theories
...at much research needed because none of these theory is convincing. Hence in conclusion, aft...
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Line 17, column 88, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...use none of these theory is convincing. Hence in conclusion, after this holistic anal...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, whereas, while, as for, as to, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 22.412803532 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2476.0 1373.03311258 180% => OK
No of words: 390.0 270.72406181 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.34871794872 5.08290768461 125% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.04702891845 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.95828760484 2.5805825403 153% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 145.348785872 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 614.7 419.366225166 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 13.0662251656 191% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 93.0690066564 49.2860985944 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.04 110.228320801 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 21.698381199 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88 7.06452816374 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 4.19205298013 620% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 18.0 4.27373068433 421% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0858825815251 0.272083759551 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0369808331731 0.0996497079465 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561406696794 0.0662205650399 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0594882173944 0.162205337803 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392255356097 0.0443174109184 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.3589403974 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.8541721854 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.25 12.2367328918 157% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 63.6247240618 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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