Overweight in many countries is a common problem and citizens’ health and fitness level is also decreasing. What are the causes of this problem and what could be done to tackle this problem?
In today's era, overweight has become a major hindrance in the growth of an individual in various forms. Furthermore, health and weight consider as an interrelated aspect. However, many people are now becoming victim of overweight which result in the deterioration of their health. Therefore, I am going to highlight the causes and solutions of this grave issue.
To begin with, healthy person can merely contribute in the development of society, but due to reckless attitude of people, they are confronting many predicaments related to overweight which is attributed to number of causes. Firstly, people now prefer to have sedentary lifestyle due to evolution of technology as a result of which no physical efforts from side of people are giving to do any work because technology has made every work a cakewalk with nominal human efforts for them. Secondly, people have comprehensively indulged themselves in the work, irrespective of thinking about their health due to hectic lifestyle, which in turn result their inclination towards junk food, which deems a prime cause. Thirdly, an availability of non-nutritious food at an economical price in comparison to organic food, thus deterioration of health is prevalent.
However, every situation comes with bright and dark side, which is similar in this case. thus, better initiatives at right time can make people to cope with this ramification conveniently. Firstly, government should levy heavy taxes on non-nutritious outlets, which make available such foods at every place. Secondly, there should be some initiatives from government side as well as by giants to aware people about the negative impacts of eating junk foods which ultimately leads to overweight. Thirdly, promotion of public transport so that people could move out of their motionless zone and put some physical efforts towards their health. For instance, country like India, where more than 65 percent population is youth, thus if government will use such youth power then India can surely be developed in short span, however most of the youngsters are facing problem of overweight, which is regressive for such country.
To conclude, fruitful outcome can only be possible, when people's mentality will be changed and when they will understand that everything is associated with health whether it is money, happiness and so on. As quote goes, "Health is wealth".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, well, for instance, in short, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 30.3222958057 188% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.01324503311 279% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2034.0 1373.03311258 148% => OK
No of words: 377.0 270.72406181 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39522546419 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96311523985 2.5805825403 115% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 145.348785872 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 419.366225166 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.9273897965 49.2860985944 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.125 110.228320801 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5625 21.698381199 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0625 7.06452816374 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133240421465 0.272083759551 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468529907507 0.0996497079465 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325642468981 0.0662205650399 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785767389869 0.162205337803 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306369840837 0.0443174109184 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.3589403974 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.8541721854 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.0289183223 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.2367328918 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 63.6247240618 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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