summarize the points made in the lecture about solutions to frog population decline, being sure toexplain how they cast doubt on the specific points made in the reading about frog population decline.

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summarize the points made in the lecture about solutions to frog population decline, being sure to

explain how they cast doubt on the specific points made in the reading about frog population decline.

The reading states that frog population have declined in number or even gone to extinct due to change in their environment and provides three reasons to solve this problem. However, the professor explains that none of the offering reasons in the passage are practical and refutes each of the author's reasons.

First, the reading states that frogs are being harmed by pesticides, which are chemical used to prevent insects from damaging farm crops. The professor opposes this point by indicating that prohibiting the use of pesticides by farmers are not practical or fair and leads farmer to can't compete in the today's competitive markets. Although banning the pesticides might have benefit for frogs, it causes farmers to experience sever disadvantages in compare to other region's farmers by losing more crops and have a lower yield.

Second, the reading claims that major factor in frog’s population decline is a fungus that has spread around the world with deadly effect. However, the professor contends that recent method that researchers use to treat frogs relate to treatment of each individual frog. Furthermore, this treatment doesn't prevent this disease from passing on to new generation which means researchers should treat each individual frog in new generation either. Therefore, the treatment procedure is a complicated and very expensive approach.

Third, the article avers that in a great many cases, frog populations are in decline simply because their natural habitats are threatened. The lecture refutes this point by mentioning that we can't save frogs by protecting water habitats from excessive water use. Draining of wetlands isn't big threat and the real threat is global warming which in some parts cause species to extinct. Hence, protecting wetlands seems unlikely to prevent from frog’s population decline as there is a threat of global warming.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 282, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...t practical or fair and leads farmer to cant compete in the todays competitive marke...
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Line 9, column 213, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...nds that recent method that researchers use to treat frogs relate to treatment of e...
^^^
Line 9, column 305, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...idual frog. Furthermore, this treatment doesnt prevent this disease from passing on to...
^^^^^^
Line 13, column 193, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...efutes this point by mentioning that we cant save frogs by protecting water habitats...
^^^^
Line 13, column 285, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...cessive water use. Draining of wetlands isnt big threat and the real threat is globa...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, however, second, so, therefore, third

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1373.03311258 117% => OK
No of words: 296.0 270.72406181 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41216216216 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65374363449 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 145.348785872 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570945945946 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 419.366225166 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3074970708 49.2860985944 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.230769231 110.228320801 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 21.698381199 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.06452816374 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166365130926 0.272083759551 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604689841745 0.0996497079465 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467806466313 0.0662205650399 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967440752423 0.162205337803 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274245932274 0.0443174109184 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.3589403974 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.2367328918 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.42419426049 111% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 63.6247240618 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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