Summarize the points made in the lecture, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading passage.
The reading and the lecture are both about Pluto, which is believed to be one of the planets in the solar system. The author of the reading believes that Pluto lost membership in the solar system. The lecturer casts doubt on the claims made in the article. She thinks that it didn’t lose membership in the solar system.
First of all, the author points out that Pluto is no longer counted as a planet in the solar system. It is mentioned that this decision was made among scientists after voting in the International Astronomical Union conference. This point is challenged by the lecturer. She says excluding Pluto from the solar system started a big conflict among scientists which was called Pluto war. Furthermore, she argues that voting was based on ten percent of all astronomical union members because five hundred astronomers presented from ten thousand astronomers.
Secondly, the author contends that the size of Pluto was estimated to be similar to the earth size. The article notes that later discovered the size of Pluto was smaller than the earth’s moon and other moons. The lecturer rebuts this argument. She suggests that many scientists believed that if an object clears its orbit then it is a planet. she elaborates on this by mentioning that Earth, Mars, Neptune, and Jupiter have asteroids as neighbors, so they can not clear their orbit but they are a planet.
Finally, the author states that reclassifying Pluto honors the fact IUC's decision "science is self-correcting”. The article establishes that new children wouldn't know that Pluto was one of the solar systems. The lecturer, on the other hand, posits that IUC's decision disappointed many people. She puts forth the idea that children wouldn't forget about Pluto because thirteen of the march was nominated Pluto’s day.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 198, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...to lost membership in the solar system. The lecturer casts doubt on the claims made...
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Line 3, column 348, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...t clears its orbit then it is a planet. she elaborates on this by mentioning that E...
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Line 4, column 164, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...e article establishes that new children wouldnt know that Pluto was one of the solar sy...
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Line 4, column 341, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
.... She puts forth the idea that children wouldnt forget about Pluto because thirteen of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 22.412803532 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1373.03311258 111% => OK
No of words: 298.0 270.72406181 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12751677852 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82900833158 2.5805825403 110% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53355704698 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 419.366225166 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8313396559 49.2860985944 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8888888889 110.228320801 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5555555556 21.698381199 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38888888889 7.06452816374 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 4.45695364238 202% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0880436021148 0.272083759551 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379980909518 0.0996497079465 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650564844501 0.0662205650399 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0555491035207 0.162205337803 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044666376694 0.0443174109184 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.3589403974 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 63.6247240618 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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