TPO-01 - Integrated Writing Task In the United States, employees typically work five days a week for eight hours each day. However, many employees want to work a four-day week and are willing to accept less pay inorder to do so. A mandatory policy requiri

The reading and the lecture is about on the employees and their needs that they want a job, which is are for 4 days in a week rather than 5 days in weeks, 8 hours per day. The author of reading beliefs that it is a brilliant option for all the workers while the professor casts doubt on this, he says, it does not do really any work by reducing the days. he thinks, this is not an right option for overcome all the problem related to this.

First of all, according to the lecturer, by minimizing the days of employees does not prefer a better option, because if this option would be select, then it could more costly due to hiring a new employees for that compensation. The reading passage explain this by challenge that it could be better to increase fresh workers by new set ups.

Second, the reading passage describes the it leads to economical matters very huge, because there is less salary for 4 days workers rather than 5 days. While according to the professor, it does not seems very positive because you are paying more money to recent job holders as well as must give training them is necessary too.

In the last, the author of the reading also explains, there is more opportunity for the new workers as a new jobs available for the coming generation, more advantage by the presenting more vacancies and it will be very beneficial to the young generation. Although the lecturer opposes this, there is a huge risk to take a new hireling, he thinks it is not a convenient option, as new coworkers will have a lot of problem, the will not worry about this.

Thus, the lecture and reading, both claims and challenges each others view point by summarizing their points according to their level of understanding.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 356, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...o really any work by reducing the days. he thinks, this is not an right option for...
^^
Line 1, column 379, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ducing the days. he thinks, this is not an right option for overcome all the probl...
^^
Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'employee'?
Suggestion: employee
...t could more costly due to hiring a new employees for that compensation. The reading pass...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 39, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'it'?
Suggestion: the; it
... Second, the reading passage describes the it leads to economical matters very huge, ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'seem'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: seem
...according to the professor, it does not seems very positive because you are paying mo...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'seem'
Suggestion: seem
...according to the professor, it does not seems very positive because you are paying mo...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 328, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...st give training them is necessary too. In the last, the author of the reading a...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 110, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'job'?
Suggestion: job
...pportunity for the new workers as a new jobs available for the coming generation, mo...
^^^^
Line 7, column 405, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of problems'.
Suggestion: a lot of problems
...ient option, as new coworkers will have a lot of problem, the will not worry about this. Thus...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, really, second, so, then, thus, well, while, as well as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1373.03311258 103% => OK
No of words: 310.0 270.72406181 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57741935484 5.08290768461 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49986680186 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 145.348785872 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516129032258 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 419.366225166 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 21.2450331126 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.86240696 49.2860985944 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.9 110.228320801 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 21.698381199 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06452816374 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293661969855 0.272083759551 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114442938963 0.0996497079465 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949458135503 0.0662205650399 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153813261504 0.162205337803 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0967382286126 0.0443174109184 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.3589403974 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 53.8541721854 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.0289183223 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.88 12.2367328918 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 63.6247240618 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.498013245 137% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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