TPO-10 - Integrated Writing Task The sea otter is a small mammal that lives in waters along the western coast of North America from California to Alaska. When some sea otter populations off the Alaskan coast started rapidly declining a few years ago, it c

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TPO-10 - Integrated Writing Task The sea otter is a small mammal that lives in waters along the western coast of North America from California to Alaska. When some sea otter populations off the Alaskan coast started rapidly declining a few years ago, it c

The professor discusses the quick decline of small sea mammals among North America's west coast, and why it has been proved to be controversial. The information he presents is in direct contrast with the details outlined in the reading passage.

First, the lecturer denies the claims that the pollution is the main reason for the population reduction. he explains that the mammals are probably victim of larger predators. according to him, the larger predators kill the mammals and as a result the death mammals' bodies wash up on the Alaskan shore. In the contrary, the reading specify that these species have rapidly diminished because of many pollution sources found among the coast which indirectly affect the mammals' death.

Secondly, the speaker points out that orcas have changed their diets routines once wales extinct by the coast. In addition, the orcas started hunting other animals of prey such as small otters which are more often present among the coast. On the other hand, the reading makes that pollution is the main cause of the rapid vanishing <span style="font-size: 19.36px;">of</span><span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> various small marine animals</span>.

Finally, the professor discusses the uneven pattern of this decline, and he mentions that many large predators as orcas cannot reach the shallow and rocky places where other little otters is drastically more dense. he indicates that the places which are more accessible for the predators are usually places where these small mammals wane. Nonetheless, according to the reading, the irregular pattern of pollutants on the island is the major reason the polluted animals are not present among whole Alaskan seaboard.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...in reason for the population reduction. he explains that the mammals are probably ...
^^
Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: According
...re probably victim of larger predators. according to him, the larger predators kill the m...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 468, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'mammals'' or 'mammal's'?
Suggestion: mammals'; mammal's
...g the coast which indirectly affect the mammals death. Secondly, the speaker points ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 216, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...ittle otters is drastically more dense. he indicates that the places which are mor...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, in addition, such as, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1373.03311258 106% => OK
No of words: 265.0 270.72406181 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49811320755 5.08290768461 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26066123851 2.5805825403 126% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562264150943 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 419.366225166 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8281815286 49.2860985944 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.416666667 110.228320801 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 21.698381199 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.06452816374 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26889662984 0.272083759551 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938651327804 0.0996497079465 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569612069218 0.0662205650399 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145998022747 0.162205337803 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208161757642 0.0443174109184 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.3589403974 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.2367328918 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 63.6247240618 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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