TPO-11 - Integrated Writing Task A recent study reveals that people especially young people are reading far less literature,novels, plays, and poems,than they used to. This is troubling because the trend has unfortunate effects for the reading public, for

Lecture says agree with this statement that young people are reading less literature than before. But in it's opinion, it is not a trouble as reading mention.
First, the writer makes the point that the decline in reading literature makes it impossible to stimulate people’s intellect. However, the professor demonstrates a different idea that there are also other books such as science writing, history and political analysis that can develop people’s imagination.
Second, reading says nowadays that people spend their time on music or movies or websites instead of reading literature and it is harmful for the culture. but in fact, these are lots of musics and movies or the other entertainments that create valuable culture even better than books. also, the type of culture has been changed in comparison to past. some elements of culture are placed in media or visual and verbal products.
Finally, lecture agrees with decreasing in support of literature in these days. but it says it is not reader's fault. lecture believe it is the result of low quality of literature products and if they present high quality books audiences will welcome them.

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Average: 7 (2 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 190, Rule ID: ALSO_OTHER[1]
Message: Use simply 'there are other' or 'there are also'
Suggestion: there are other; there are also
...ssor demonstrates a different idea that there are also other books such as science writing, history ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...ture and it is harmful for the culture. but in fact, these are lots of musics and m...
^^^
Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...aluable culture even better than books. also, the type of culture has been changed i...
^^^^
Line 3, column 351, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...has been changed in comparison to past. some elements of culture are placed in media...
^^^^
Line 4, column 81, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...in support of literature in these days. but it says it is not reader apos;s fault. ...
^^^
Line 4, column 124, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lecture
... it says it is not reader apos;s fault. lecture believe it is the result of low quality...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, in fact, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 30.3222958057 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 1373.03311258 72% => OK
No of words: 192.0 270.72406181 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13020833333 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 4.04702891845 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53259459315 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 145.348785872 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598958333333 0.540411800872 111% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 419.366225166 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3622707544 49.2860985944 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5454545455 110.228320801 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 21.698381199 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 7.06452816374 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333815401795 0.272083759551 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116310028236 0.0996497079465 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101992542116 0.0662205650399 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201903221554 0.162205337803 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791283779226 0.0443174109184 179% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.3589403974 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 63.6247240618 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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