It is feasible to create genetic modified trees that produce more fruits, grow faster and many more benefits. Paragraph states the advantages of genetically modified trees over the natural trees. Where as lecture casts doubt on the explanation provided in the paragraph.
Firstly, paragraph shows that artificial trees are more likely to survive because they are pest resistant like prevent ring spot virus in papaya trees. Casting doubt on the opinion, lecture states that genetically modified trees are resistant to one particular condition which depicts that that they grow uniformly and if condition alters all trees will die. Where as natural trees survive in a threatening condition and some individual trees can survive. There is no chance of complete clearance in case of natural trees.
Secondly, paragraph states that genetically modified trees boost the economic condition of the person who grows them because of capability to grow faster, produce more fruits. While lecture states that natural trees can grow easily from the seeds which can be obtained from the developed trees. In case of genetically modified trees, farmers need to pay every time for the new offspring.
Thirdly, reading displays that artificial trees prevent over exploitation of the wild trees as they can grow faster which leads to meet the demand of the wood and indirectly saving endangered trees. Where as lecture states that artificial trees grow aggressively and consumes sunlight, nutrients from the soil and water which leads to cutting of the natural resources.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 197, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Whereas'?
Suggestion: Whereas
... modified trees over the natural trees. Where as lecture casts doubt on the explanation ...
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Line 2, column 285, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: that
... one particular condition which depicts that that they grow uniformly and if condition al...
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Line 2, column 359, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Whereas'?
Suggestion: Whereas
...if condition alters all trees will die. Where as natural trees survive in a threatening ...
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Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ty to grow faster, produce more fruits. While lecture states that natural trees can g...
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Line 4, column 199, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Whereas'?
Suggestion: Whereas
...and indirectly saving endangered trees. Where as lecture states that artificial trees gr...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'firstly', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.249056603774 0.261695866417 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.169811320755 0.158904122519 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0943396226415 0.0723426182421 130% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0603773584906 0.0435111971325 139% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0188679245283 0.0277247811725 68% => OK
Prepositions: 0.139622641509 0.128828473217 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0415094339623 0.0370669169778 112% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.56046903242 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0264150943396 0.0208969081088 126% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0754716981132 0.128158765124 59% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0188679245283 0.0158828679856 119% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0415094339623 0.0114777025283 362% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1556.0 1645.83664459 95% => OK
No of words: 245.0 271.125827815 90% => OK
Chars per words: 6.35102040816 6.08160592843 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.04852973271 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.408163265306 0.374372842146 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.318367346939 0.287516216867 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.212244897959 0.187439937562 113% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.14693877551 0.113142543107 130% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56046903242 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 145.348785872 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502040816327 0.539623497131 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.6161315141 53.8517498576 87% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0529801325 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.4166666667 21.7502111507 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4736769168 49.3711431718 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.666666667 132.220823453 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4166666667 21.7502111507 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.878197800319 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.39072847682 147% => OK
Readability: 52.2534013605 50.5018328374 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.72727272727 1.90840788429 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.620758322454 0.549887131256 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.144492979794 0.142949733639 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0749041197579 0.0787303798458 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.614165549179 0.631733273073 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.127315788315 0.139662658121 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.30187576626 0.266732575781 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913881479015 0.103435571967 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.424465204179 0.414875509568 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0310286009876 0.0530846634433 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.473352266182 0.40443939384 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245625913762 0.0528353158467 46% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.26048565121 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 3.49668874172 172% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 3.62251655629 166% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.1766004415 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 12.0 10.2958057395 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.