Genetic modification refers to process to change an organism's genes and characteristics. Using genetic modification is a common process for trees. The reading passage thinks that using modified trees in large scale has a number of benefits. But the lecturer thinks that this method is not as great as it seems and has some drawbacks.
The reading passage thinks that genetically modified trees are harder and more resistant than unmodified trees. The reading passage uses an example of papaya trees in Hawaii, which has been developed against virus that have damaged the native papaya trees. But the lecturer thinks that modified trees are resistant to one condition. They have to design for other conditions to have the ability to stand in them.
The reading passage thinks that modified trees bring number of economy benefits to those grow them. Because, modified trees grow faster and produce greater food. But the lecturer thinks that farmers can't collect the seeds and grow modified trees again. Hence, farmers have to pay for seeds anually and this causes overcharge for farmers.
Finally, the reading passage thinks that genetically modified trees can prevent over exploitation of nature trees. Because many forests around the world are being cut down faster than they can be replaced. But the lecturer thinks that there are some enviromental issues in growing modified trees. The lecturer thinks that modified trees grow aggresively and outcompete other trees for resources.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 53, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'organisms'' or 'organism's'?
Suggestion: organisms'; organism's
...fication refers to process to change an organisms genes and characteristics. Using geneti...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...at as it seems and has some drawbacks. The reading passage thinks that genetica...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... to have the ability to stand in them. The reading passage thinks that modified...
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Line 3, column 201, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...d. But the lecturer thinks that farmers cant collect the seeds and grow modified tre...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...nd this causes overcharge for farmers. Finally, the reading passage thinks that...
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Line 4, column 117, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...vent over exploitation of nature trees. Because many forests around the world are being...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 30.3222958057 66% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1373.03311258 91% => OK
No of words: 236.0 270.72406181 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29661016949 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47585293281 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 145.348785872 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483050847458 0.540411800872 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 380.7 419.366225166 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 21.2450331126 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.9906228017 49.2860985944 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.125 110.228320801 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 21.698381199 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6875 7.06452816374 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.530608306792 0.272083759551 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.204597948138 0.0996497079465 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891839777357 0.0662205650399 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.365271041336 0.162205337803 225% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563767009161 0.0443174109184 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.3589403974 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 53.8541721854 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.0289183223 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 63.6247240618 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.498013245 72% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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