TPO 29-INTEGRATED TASK
The readind and the listening are both about migration of an distincted big size animal, named edmontosaurs, in the winter time of it's habitat. Whereas the penman of the text argues that there are reasons to support this migration, the orator believes that the provided reasons are not convincing. moreover, the lecturer offers 3 theories to challenge the main points made in the reading.
First of all, the author states that this special type of dinosaur migrated to south to have a suitable diet by the plants. In contrast, the lecturer views this issue from an opposite angle. Furthermore, she says that the living place of the edmontosaurs was warmer than today. Thus, North Slope was a proper place to plants to grow widely and being available until the winter time as a dead plant.
The second provided by the author of the passage is about the discovered skeletons from the same place which is a normal goal of migration for animals today. Conversely, the speaker claims that the other animals in these days going to that place due to protection from predetors.
Finally, the writer of the reading passage believes that the edmonotsaurs were capable to migrate because of the ability to run fast. On the other hand, the professor suggests that if the adult animal was fast enough for a migration, What about the kids? moreover, she illustrates that the tiny animal was not able to survive alone in the place.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 59, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...e listening are both about migration of an distincted big size animal, named edmon...
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Line 1, column 299, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...he provided reasons are not convincing. moreover, the lecturer offers 3 theories to chal...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 256, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...h for a migration, What about the kids? moreover, she illustrates that the tiny animal w...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, thus, whereas, in contrast, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 30.3222958057 122% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 1373.03311258 86% => OK
No of words: 243.0 270.72406181 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85596707819 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49776272057 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576131687243 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 419.366225166 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.2605738914 49.2860985944 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.3333333333 110.228320801 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 21.698381199 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06452816374 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246499795493 0.272083759551 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782429894542 0.0996497079465 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506179500188 0.0662205650399 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134789974386 0.162205337803 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473620897499 0.0443174109184 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.3589403974 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.2367328918 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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