The reading and the speaker discussing the electronic medical report significant but in very contrast ways.
Firstly, reading passage says the it will reduce the cost since it occupies less storage areas but the paper records required lot of space to sore it. Further, it is use to access for the doctors who want to have medical records and transforming and sending fax, coping are very easier. But, the lecture refutes this point by saying that even though when we made things in electronic form still the paper record is must for the legal purposes and backup and to verify the signature.
Secondly, reading states that it can reduces the errors like manual hand writing and spelling mistakes because it consists of standard font size and format. Still, the speaker refuses this point by stating that the doctors are writing while taking physical examination of the patient, and, when the medical staff those who working the doctors will copy that hand written notes while entering the data, so mistakes are unavoidable .
Finally, reading claims that it is helpful for who do the researcher on certain topics because it easy to get more information the system they need not to go for all paper records, it cost much time whereas electronic records gives all information at anyplace. Again, the professor oppses this point by explaining that all the medical records comes under the privacy policy then, it need a lot of permission from the authority including patients. If, the patient selecting the option of block the information it become more difficulty to access the patient records.
To sum up, Reading suggests that electronic records may be more beneficial because it cost less money, reduces the errors and useful for the researchers but the speaker refutes all these points with reasonable arguments .
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ecord is must for the legal purposes and backup and to verify the signature. ...
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...nd writing and spelling mistakes because it consists of standard font size and fo...
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...ause it easy to get more information the system they need not to go for all paper...
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...l these points with reasonable arguments .
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'whereas', 'while', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.248466257669 0.261695866417 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.165644171779 0.158904122519 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0828220858896 0.0723426182421 114% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0429447852761 0.0435111971325 99% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0429447852761 0.0277247811725 155% => OK
Prepositions: 0.10736196319 0.128828473217 83% => OK
Participles: 0.058282208589 0.0370669169778 157% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.45421430269 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0245398773006 0.0208969081088 117% => OK
Particles: 0.00306748466258 0.00154638098197 198% => OK
Determiners: 0.122699386503 0.128158765124 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0153374233129 0.0158828679856 97% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0184049079755 0.0114777025283 160% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1840.0 1645.83664459 112% => OK
No of words: 302.0 271.125827815 111% => OK
Chars per words: 6.09271523179 6.08160592843 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.04852973271 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.394039735099 0.374372842146 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.301324503311 0.287516216867 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.152317880795 0.187439937562 81% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0927152317881 0.113142543107 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45421430269 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 145.348785872 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569536423841 0.539623497131 106% => OK
Word variations: 60.7374503387 53.8517498576 113% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0529801325 77% => OK
Sentence length: 30.2 21.7502111507 139% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8602770682 49.3711431718 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 184.0 132.220823453 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2 21.7502111507 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4 0.878197800319 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 3.39072847682 649% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 60.3324503311 50.5018328374 119% => OK
Elegance: 1.64634146341 1.90840788429 86% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.543882799769 0.549887131256 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.137548827209 0.142949733639 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0348982399531 0.0787303798458 44% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.751045161114 0.631733273073 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.141154080083 0.139662658121 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.282319138047 0.266732575781 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397999039409 0.103435571967 38% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.397398202708 0.414875509568 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0176418720829 0.0530846634433 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.35475600294 0.40443939384 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0815827229305 0.0528353158467 154% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.26048565121 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 3.49668874172 172% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.62251655629 83% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.1766004415 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 9.0 10.2958057395 87% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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