TPO 49 INTEGRATED

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TPO 49 INTEGRATED

  There has been many debate among  whether the humpbacks navigate using stars or not. The lecture says that the humpbacks are migrating  by using other ways rather than the stars. However, the reading argues that the humpbacks   are migrating   by using  the stars and enumerates three reasons of support.
 
      The first point of dispute  is that humpbacks are intelligent enough to use stars as a navigator while they are migrating. The lecture says that there is no connection between how humpbacks are intelligent and between their ability to use the stars while they are migrating. For example ducks are not so intelligent and they are able to migrate as well. However, the reading argues that humpbacks  brains have a high degree of complexity of intelligent, that is why they could migrate by using the stars.
 
 
 
     Another controversial issue is that the humpbacks navigate in straight-line. The lecture says that humpbacks move in straight lines because the have some internal biomagnified force in their body. This biomagnified force is sensitive to the earth magnetic field that help them to move in straight line while they are migrating But, the reading disagrees by saying that the humpbacks move in straight lines because they are orientated by some external feature like land marks.
 
 
     The final point of dispute is that the humpbacks  have an unusual  behavior  called spy hoppy. The lecture says that the  some other animals like sharks have the same behavior and they do not migrate or even look  at the stars. Sharks do  spy hoppy in the morning while there are no stars in the sky.  Also shark are not migrated. Yet, the reading  contradicts this point saying that humpbacks  are doing this behavior to help them looking at the sky while they are migrated from one place to another.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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  There has been many debate among  whethe...
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  There has been many debate among  whether the humpbacks navigate u...
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  There has been many debate among  whether the humpbacks navigate using sta...
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...re says that the humpbacks are migrating  by using other ways rather than the star...
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...r, the reading argues that the humpbacks   are migrating   by using  the stars and ...
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...rgues that the humpbacks   are migrating   by using  the stars and enumerates three...
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...the humpbacks   are migrating   by using  the stars and enumerates three reasons o...
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... enumerates three reasons of support.         The first point of dispute  is that hump...
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...t.         The first point of dispute  is that humpbacks are intelligent enough...
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...wever, the reading argues that humpbacks  brains have a high degree of complexity ...
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...hey could migrate by using the stars.            Another controversial issue is that the ...
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...ome external feature like land marks.          The final point of dispute is that the h...
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...l point of dispute is that the humpbacks  have an unusual  behavior  called spy ho...
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...e is that the humpbacks  have an unusual  behavior  called spy hoppy. The lecture ...
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...the humpbacks  have an unusual  behavior  called spy hoppy. The lecture says that ...
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...led spy hoppy. The lecture says that the  some other animals like sharks have the ...
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...ior and they do not migrate or even look  at the stars. Sharks do  spy hoppy in th...
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...te or even look  at the stars. Sharks do  spy hoppy in the morning while there are...
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...ing while there are no stars in the sky.  Also shark are not migrated. Yet, the re...
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...shark are not migrated. Yet, the reading  contradicts this point saying that humpb...
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...radicts this point saying that humpbacks  are doing this behavior to help them loo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, well, while, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.4613686534 201% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1373.03311258 114% => OK
No of words: 310.0 270.72406181 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05161290323 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6518091129 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 145.348785872 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464516129032 0.540411800872 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 419.366225166 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1663783152 49.2860985944 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.857142857 110.228320801 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 21.698381199 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 7.06452816374 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 4.19205298013 525% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342451785752 0.272083759551 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14227115433 0.0996497079465 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457189513645 0.0662205650399 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219590397233 0.162205337803 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449078544331 0.0443174109184 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.3589403974 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.8541721854 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.2367328918 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.42419426049 91% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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