TPO11Independant
Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The earth is our home as well as the home for many other species. However, humans are behaving so that the earth is their own property and are disregarding other forms of living on the earth. The earth is the habitat for us and many other species as well, thus everything we do with the planet is very important. Some people believe that human being has made the earth a better place for leaving; while others disagree. I believe that human being has apparently harmed the earth and it is now a much less favorable place for life for several reasons.
To begin, we have been harming many ecosystems around the world, especially during the last two decades by several activities such as industrial activities and cultivation. The pollution made by these activities and spewed into the atmosphere and water has been incredible. The pollution has affected many species of animals and caused many of them to come to extinction. The increasing pollution even had an adverse effect on us. As an example, I can instance my home town. When I was younger I used to go to the country and saw many birds and animals such as fox, badgers etc. But now after 20 years, manufacturing industries have replaced all that impressive nature, and no animal can be seen around the factory. As you can see, the pollution is very detrimental to the natural life.
Second, the exponentially increasing human population on earth had made it a worse place for many species. The ever-increasing population need a lot of food every day and this food must be provided from nature by farming industries. This puts a heavy burden on nature. Also, there is a less and less living area for animals. For instance, many planks of wood around my town were the habitat of many species years ago. however, new homes are now being constructed there and there are no places for the animals for life and breed.
In conclusion, the human being has been very harmful to life on the earth, especially during the last two decades. We have damaged the living area of the animals and used them for cultivation and factories. also, we have polluted the earth and harmed almost every ecosystem on the earth. We should compensate for our activities in the coming years in order to make the earth a better place both for us and other species.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 372, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...sed many of them to come to extinction. The increasing pollution even had an advers...
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Line 3, column 418, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
... the habitat of many species years ago. however, new homes are now being constructed th...
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Line 4, column 207, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...sed them for cultivation and factories. also, we have polluted the earth and harmed ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, if, regarding, second, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 10.4613686534 210% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 7.30242825607 260% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.01324503311 219% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1894.0 1373.03311258 138% => OK
No of words: 404.0 270.72406181 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68811881188 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.04702891845 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55737035316 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 145.348785872 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475247524752 0.540411800872 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.9 419.366225166 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 13.0662251656 176% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5173793869 49.2860985944 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.347826087 110.228320801 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5652173913 21.698381199 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47826086957 7.06452816374 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 4.45695364238 224% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127874998318 0.272083759551 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441542582668 0.0996497079465 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295307334553 0.0662205650399 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871671619145 0.162205337803 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289905329423 0.0443174109184 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.3589403974 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.2367328918 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.42419426049 89% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 63.6247240618 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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