Tpo54 Task1
Both reading and lecture are about possible solutions for preventing turning The Salton Sea in California into a dead zone lake and inhospitable habitat for birds and fish and due to increasing salt concentration in water and slow rate of replacing freshwater with rain or river in comparison to evaporation rate on the lake. However, the lecture, finds all the idea implausible and presents some evidence to refute them.
First, the author argues that should salty water is pumped into desalination facilities is been heat and evaporate, this process will lead to leaving solid material remnant including salt and the steam will return to the lake as salt-free water. On the contrary, the professor highlights the fact that despite pumping water into desalination facilities clean water form solids material, it gives rise to toxic substances like selenium comprising remnant of lake water spread to air and endangers human-beings health who breath these poisonous ingredients in the air.
Second, the reading holds the view that delivering the pacific ocean's water via pipelines or canals into the lake culminate in the declining concentration of lake's salt owing to the reason that the ocean has a lower amount of salt. In contrast, the lecture dismisses the point due to the fact that constructing of pipeline that capable of bringing water from the pacific ocean for such long-distance which is approximately 1000 kilometers impose a tremendous financial pressure for government and administrator may not have sufficient resources for providing these canals.
Finally, the passage asserts that dividing the lake into the discrete segments could have resulted in increasing salinity in a small section and reducing salt concentration in the main section, and guide fresh water from rivers into this section, into the bargain. Conversely, the speaker brings up the fact that this solution is not feasible for a long time since the lake is located in a site that is vulnerable to frequent geological activity including earthquakes. In this regard, should an earthquake happen in the lake, the dividing walls will be collapsed and devastated into several segments and ruin the whole system.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, in contrast, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 7.30242825607 219% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 30.3222958057 152% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.01324503311 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1846.0 1373.03311258 134% => OK
No of words: 349.0 270.72406181 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2893982808 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82799168422 2.5805825403 110% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 145.348785872 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58452722063 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 419.366225166 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 21.2450331126 179% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.137683542 49.2860985944 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 205.111111111 110.228320801 186% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.7777777778 21.698381199 179% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.55555555556 7.06452816374 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.494422929588 0.272083759551 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.196702853899 0.0996497079465 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101891152849 0.0662205650399 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291361753883 0.162205337803 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046738506818 0.0443174109184 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.9 13.3589403974 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.45 53.8541721854 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.0289183223 175% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.2367328918 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.42419426049 121% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 63.6247240618 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.7273730684 186% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.498013245 164% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.2008830022 179% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.