whats the advantages and the disadvantages of converting the working days from five to four?

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whats the advantages and the disadvantages of converting the working days from five to four?

The lecturer and the reading passage both discuss an issue about the companies which want to convert the full-time job from five days to four days per week with reducing the salary to 80%from the current.
The reading states that this good idea to apply and finds it successful for both the worker and the firm. The lecture refutes this saying that it is a nonfunctional idea.
First of all, the reading claims that the four days of working will increase the profits by many ways like keeping the employees rested and alert so their quality improves as well as the errors decrease, and the firm will get more stuff with the budget, the higher numbers lead to fewer mistakes. However, the professor states that this idea will force the company to spend more money on getting new workers by paying extra cost on the training session and medical benefits. Also, they should provide more computers and offices.
In addition, the reading makes the argument that this will reduce the unemployment rates because the workload will be shifted to others. According to the professor, many companies will find that hiring new worker costly, so they will ask the same people to work overtime or that four days will be adequate to deliver the work, this means no additional jobs created.
Lastly, the reading passage argues that the four days will make the worker feels better because they are going to have more leisure time, so their submitted works will have high quality. The professor states that this has risks on worker such as reducing the quality of them, decreasing the job stability and harm their advance career. In addition, they may lose the job by the downtime as well as this hardens the management process on the supervisors.

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Average: 8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 106, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, lastly, may, so, well, in addition, such as, as well as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 5.04856512141 238% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1373.03311258 105% => OK
No of words: 298.0 270.72406181 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81543624161 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2433205913 2.5805825403 87% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 145.348785872 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553691275168 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 419.366225166 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.81307775 49.2860985944 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.454545455 110.228320801 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0909090909 21.698381199 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.06452816374 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155263051571 0.272083759551 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534002225879 0.0996497079465 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827330275994 0.0662205650399 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978245816758 0.162205337803 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905993682629 0.0443174109184 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.3589403974 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.2367328918 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 63.6247240618 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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