Everyone has their own activities when they have free time and so am i. Go jogging isan activities that i particularly enjoy whenever i am free.

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Everyone has their own activities when they have free time and so am i. Go jogging isan activities that i particularly enjoy whenever i am free.

I have been practising go jogging for e few years. I usually go jogging around the park which nears my house in the weekends. I first know about going jogging when i was a little girl. However, at that time i was not fully aware of critical important not only go jogging but also all physical exercises: Firstly, it is an ideal way for me to relieve of stress and purse a healthy lifestyle. I can regain the positive spirit after a hard-working day. Besides, thanks to go jogging i can keep fit, have a strong body and stay away from diseases. Secondly, it is also an affordable type of sport that i do not have to buy a lot of specialised sport materials such as tennis or badminton. I just need a supportive shoes or i have to pay a small fee for parking. Finally, i can enjoy the fresh air and sporty atmosphere alone or with my friends. It is all great. Everyday, i can meet many different people and make friends. Until now, i still maintain this activity and make it become a part of my lifestyle.

To sum up, there are many ways to experience our free time. But i think we should know how to use it correctly to have a meaningful and useful time.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, i think, such as, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25909090909 5.12529762239 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54078711693 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631818181818 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.3519060146 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.9285714286 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7142857143 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186416460967 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554151349996 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413077627448 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134843210798 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170307685575 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 13.0946893788 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 12.4159519038 57% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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