Short description of anemia

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Short description of anemia

Anemia is the most common blood condition in the world nowadays which develops when the body lacks red blood cells or hemoglobin. There are three primary forms of this disorder such as deficiency anemia, hypoplastic anemia and hemolytic anemia. Among these types, deficiency anemia (also known as iron-deficiency) is most well-known. Although the symptoms of anemia vary according to its type, the most visable symptoms are shortness of breath and gradual tireness, particularly when making effort or at the end of the day. Other notable signs that patients might have are insomia, restlessness and they even turn pale. If the condition left untreated, tachycaria is most likely to happen or, in the worse case, heart failure can be detected. However, this disorder is curable if it is found at the early stage and the patients strictly adhere to treatment given by doctors.

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Average: 2.2 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 568, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 41.998997996 31% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 731.0 1615.20841683 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 142.0 315.596192385 45% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14788732394 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 4.20363070211 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.690481875 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 176.041082164 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.697183098592 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 506.74238477 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9086871086 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.428571429 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20414340699 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814730877168 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902384067756 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20414340699 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.33 Out of 6
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