Essay topics:
You have spent the weekend staying with some English friend
Write a card to them, In your card, you should:
- Thank your friend for the weekend
- Say what you enjoyed most about the weekend
- Invite them to stay with you
Write 35-45 words on your answer sheet
Hi guys!
I write to thank you for a brilliant time last weekend. The computer game is the best - I am happy to be champion of the weekend! Come to my house next time for a new contest.
Philip
Votes
Transition Words or Phrases used:
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 41.998997996 10% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 156.0 1615.20841683 10% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 39.0 315.596192385 12% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.0 5.12529762239 78% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.49899939944 4.20363070211 59% => The fourth root words length is low.
Word Length SD: 2.23830292856 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 32.0 176.041082164 18% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.820512820513 0.561755894193 146% => OK
syllable_count: 48.6 506.74238477 10% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.60771543086 75% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.5 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.0 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.0 7.06120827912 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155876241659 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131164950622 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631604230912 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164941889748 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 13.0946893788 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.03 50.2224549098 171% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.92 12.4159519038 48% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 6.0 78.4519038076 8% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.33 Out of 6
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