You have spent the weekend staying with some English friend Write a card to them In your card you should Thank your friend for the weekend Say what you enjoyed most about the weekend Invite them to stay with you Write 35 45 words on your answer sheet

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You have spent the weekend staying with some English friend
Write a card to them, In your card, you should:
- Thank your friend for the weekend
- Say what you enjoyed most about the weekend
- Invite them to stay with you
Write 35-45 words on your answer sheet

Hi guys!
I write to thank you for a brilliant time last weekend. The computer game is the best - I am happy to be champion of the weekend! Come to my house next time for a new contest.
Philip

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Average: 5.2 (6 votes)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 41.998997996 10% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 156.0 1615.20841683 10% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 39.0 315.596192385 12% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.0 5.12529762239 78% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.49899939944 4.20363070211 59% => The fourth root words length is low.
Word Length SD: 2.23830292856 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 32.0 176.041082164 18% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.820512820513 0.561755894193 146% => OK
syllable_count: 48.6 506.74238477 10% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.60771543086 75% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.5 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.0 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.0 7.06120827912 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155876241659 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131164950622 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631604230912 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164941889748 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 13.0946893788 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.03 50.2224549098 171% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.92 12.4159519038 48% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 6.0 78.4519038076 8% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.33 Out of 6
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