the belching and unauthorized behavior is unacceptable in modern offices.
The importance of the belching and unauthorized behavior is unacceptable in modern offices which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. However, the substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. So this essay will further elaborate both positive and negative effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion. To begin with, there are myriad of reasons which will further elaborate this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that the unauthorized behavior such would definitely disturb the working criteria. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is that it would lead to unproductive loss of time. Needless to say, all these merits are stand in a good stead. However, there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of this trend but one of the alarming one is that belching is biological it is an inappropriate method of releasing air from your filled stomach and it is not accepted in a social culture that people live. Besides,
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also other co-workers working with you and make them feel uncomfortable. Hence, it is apparent why many are against in favor of this trend. According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of belching and unauthorized behavior is unacceptable in modern offices are instrumental indeed. Nevertheless, its potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1253, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ocial culture that people live. Besides, it also other co-workers working with ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, look, nevertheless, so, thus, while, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25939849624 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93866916669 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567669172932 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.3297044955 50.4703680194 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.583333333 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.25397266985 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.12807881773 48% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236733691753 0.242375264174 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806187597236 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154504015493 0.071462118173 216% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220652986106 0.151781067708 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514073939575 0.0609392437508 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1253, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ocial culture that people live. Besides, it also other co-workers working with ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, look, nevertheless, so, thus, while, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25939849624 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93866916669 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567669172932 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.3297044955 50.4703680194 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.583333333 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.25397266985 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.12807881773 48% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236733691753 0.242375264174 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806187597236 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154504015493 0.071462118173 216% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220652986106 0.151781067708 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514073939575 0.0609392437508 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.