The experience of work is more important than having a qualification? Do u agree or disagree?
Nowadays, there is an ongoing deliberation experience of work versus qualification for work, which attracted myriads of controversies and drawn the attention from the public. It can be agreed that experience matter most, whereas, other side of the people hold contrary perspective. This essay will discuss both sides and thus lead to logical conclusion with my agreement.
At the outset, there are plethora of reasons why skills are more essential than having degree, and the most conspicuous is that experienced person can lead to team as well as produce high quality work compare to the person only holding only knowledge. As per recent survey conducted by Oxford University resulted 60% of employers are also in favour to high skilled person instead fresher with qualification only. Therefore, practical knowledge always lead to theory understanding.
On the other hand, some people holds opposing view and trend, and believed that before working experience person should hand conceptual knowledge which can earn from degree programs. To elucidate this, most of skilled jobs are always based on some basic qualification. Hence, persons should complete their education before working experience.
Agglomerating all points above, it can be concluded that, both things are require, and its also depends on job nature which is more vital for the work. As per my prospective, every person has to have basic education than move forwards for work experience for their better future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, as to, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47844827586 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77891243836 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646551724138 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9525350012 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.545454545 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0909090909 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.25397266985 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216731568573 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727979427584 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597655288358 0.071462118173 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12799304244 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03935227746 0.0609392437508 65% => OK
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.