The importance of cars and aeroplane in modern life. Give examples.

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The importance of cars and aeroplane in modern life. Give examples.

The means of transport have revolutionized in today’s world, and with the advent of cars and aeroplanes, the commute has become very easy and comfortable for the people. The importance of cars and aeroplanes has always been a debatable topic with hardly anybody denying their role in modern life. This essay will highlight the importance of cars and aeroplanes and give a plausible conclusion.
Cars are an easy and nowadays affordable source of transport. They provide privacy and are readily available when needed. People do not have to wait for hours for public transport to take them to the destination. For example, people can go to their offices on time using their private vehicles. Also, Modern cars come equipped with the latest technologies which provide comfort, safety and less fuel cost making everyday life easy and satisfying.
On the other hand, airplanes are well suited for long-distance travel. People can visit other countries and continents in a very short space of time. For instance, people who work in corporate offices can use airplanes to visit the other branches of their company and attend business meetings. Hence, airplanes provide a very fast and robust means of transport in emergency situations and making long-distance travels look a fascinating thing to do.
To conclude, cars and airplanes provide privacy, comfort and make long-distance travel easy for commuters and make modern life very attractive.

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Average: 7.2 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...with the advent of cars and aeroplanes, the commute has become very easy and comfortable fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, so, well, for example, for instance, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 230.0 242.827586207 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28695652174 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81482706712 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5290177282 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5384615385 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6923076923 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.25397266985 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218315337527 0.242375264174 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083115239219 0.0925447433944 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117066549581 0.071462118173 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156537218359 0.151781067708 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137290208922 0.0609392437508 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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