The majority of television news being reported is bad news: wars, famines, accidents and crime. Some people think that television news should be a mixture of good and bad news.
Choose whether you agree or disagree with this statement and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
The media is responsible for widespread coverage and our perception of the news from all over the world. Some people think that news that we watch should be a blend of positive and negative events, however, others disagree and argue for freedom of electronic media. In this essay, I will explain why it is apt to have a balance of positive and negative news for the society.
Firstly, as human beings, we all agree that watching negative programs or news on the television creates stress and tension in our minds. The violent news programs showing heinous human acts are not only intimidating but also provoking. For instance, media coverage of a war between two countries is less on the current situation but more on the trauma and difficulties faced by the people in the war affected area. As a result, it develops pessimistic thoughts in the people watching such programs. Therefore, media can reduce unnecessary stress on the society by avoiding negative news.
Secondly, the positive news creates a healthy environment for humanity. It improves people's faith in human values such as trust, care and support others in tough situations. For instance, watching the documentary of Mother Teresa inspire us to work towards the development of underprivileged. Hence, positive news helps in building more robust and resilient society.
In conclusion, realistic portrayal of positive events is necessary to bring positive changes in the society and avoiding negative news can keep us stress-free. In my opinion, a balanced television news should be good in order to keep all of us duly informed about different events happening around the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
The media is responsible for widespread coverage and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16417910448 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81399693462 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555970149254 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3827524819 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8571428571 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2857142857 7.25397266985 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252928158103 0.242375264174 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922059910253 0.0925447433944 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613962007201 0.071462118173 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16023597354 0.151781067708 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446141415528 0.0609392437508 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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